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Old 03-17-09, 11:39 AM   #1
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welcome back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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black magic-verse 1
krucial-verse 2
steve swagger-hooks/third verse



http://www.zshare.net/audio/57180340ba015b81/

can yall let me know if the volume fades in and out think when i mixed it it may have fucked up
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Old 03-17-09, 02:08 PM   #2
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feed it.........................please and thank you suckas
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Old 03-17-09, 03:05 PM   #3
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i was feeling your verse the most out of the three...stay humble though...the chorus seems too loud compared to the other verses, but i did have a headache when i was listening so i'll check back in a few hours
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Old 03-17-09, 03:23 PM   #4
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ight cool cuz on the comp im using to upload it it sounded to get louder when my verse started then after a few barz went back to normal but a few people said that it was fine but imm check the files when i go back to the studio today thanx fer the feed if you need it returned drop the link
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Old 03-19-09, 04:51 PM   #5
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Old 03-20-09, 08:24 PM   #6
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I liked this drop, i think the first verse needs to sound alittle louder(the spit),but throughtout it was going up and down like crazy.
I liked your verse best, nice with the multi's and it was a good drop.Definately the best verse in the whole song.....

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Old 03-20-09, 09:00 PM   #7
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respect upping for sum feed and anyone needs there projects fed just link it
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Old 03-21-09, 01:08 PM   #8
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Old 03-22-09, 05:58 PM   #9
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i'd love to understand anything Magik was saying at the beggin but i couldn't cuz he was like eating the mic....


kruical was meh, ok i guess


You were the best on this beat, your quailty was just better overal


but i thought that the whole 'swagger'-type rap is played as fuck man

like, EVERYbody just raps about the dumbest shit now a days

so...yay
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Old 03-23-09, 02:51 AM   #10
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third verse killed it,couldnt understand the first verse second verse was alright,hook was decent..
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Old 05-19-09, 06:49 PM   #11
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Old 05-19-09, 10:44 PM   #12
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this thatt vybe beat right? why doesnt anyone else take the time to take it out the beat??

sam comin hard...i feel i heard parts of this verse before.....i aint talked to that muh fucker in a while...

hook lacks....needs more ambiance....reverb? echo? make the hook EPIC not just coo

second guy needs to be turned up fa real just cuz the way he anunciates his words... needs to be louder to understand....man you missed out on some dope production shit yall coulda done...

shoulda punched the middle of the hook....lazy muh fucker, it takes away from it
nice verse....needs more flavor....the beat drop was dope tho....cool shit...
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