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10-19-05, 11:46 AM
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Tyte new shyt from Q: A Beautiful Gay...in the neighborhood....holla atcha boy!!!!!!
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or http://www.soundclick.com/qakaprox ^^Click on "A Beautiful Gay..in the neighborhood" Beat: DJ JB "Beautifuldea" Sample: from "Mr. Roger's Neighborhood" Mixing: All Q Chorus: All Q (yea, did my John Legend impression in the background ha) Lyrics: All verses Q **I mixed this as 8 bars hook, 8 verse, 8 hook, 8 verse, 8 hook, verse, 8 hook **Just a little joint..my first full length song ever... 4:31 s  Holla 1 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211974 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=212008 Last edited by Tha Q. : 10-19-05 at 12:08 PM. |
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10-19-05, 11:50 AM
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dmusic must be down:/
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10-19-05, 11:59 AM
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^^Word...I put it on my S/C as well
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10-19-05, 12:02 PM
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lol @ the intro all pianoy...lol...??? is that you singing?...lol beats nice kicked in well...ah i hear you singin in the background lol...not bad...not John Legend but aight...real quiet...but main vocals...lyrically aight...flow is nice...delivery ye it's cool standard Q style...
Personal track hook aight...2nd verse faster lyrics...working with the beat well...flow switched as well which was good...honestly can't relate to the track...but it's a good track on an expression point of view... 3rd verse goin at Phenom...and other RV heads...rhymes aight...beat don't let you flow for too long switches a lot used a lotta time on the hook... a 4th verse now...it's consistant flow & lyrically to the other verses... Overall a good track...only thing i can say is it's "contraversial"...which in rap...is good...keep droppin Q.
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10-19-05, 12:43 PM
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preciate the feed
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10-19-05, 03:19 PM
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Listening...
LMFAO at intro. Anyway...hook was good...dropped a shitload of fuckins...I dotn neccessarily like how you structured this song though...8 hook, 8 verse, etc...seems to drag the song on. But anyway, wasnt feelin the beat that much either...but your fucking flow and multies...gawd damn.... Nuff said. Good track. |
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10-19-05, 03:28 PM
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^^Word...that 8 bar structure shit was buggin me too...but that's how the beat was made
iono...had I made the verses 16 bars each, it wudda carried over into what sounded like the hook bridge 1 |
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10-19-05, 03:57 PM
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Im listenin, lmfao at the intro, likin the echoes, beat is more of a movie beat, I dont feel that if I was to hear this beat I would picture a rapper on this, but you did it well, however youre goin slower rite so more emotion I think, oh wait its upped so much more after th hook, 2nd verse likin that, like switch of speed....hook is aiight, feelin the lyrics, flow good all throghout mainly 2nd and 3rd verse....3rd verse you did real well, I think 1st verse was somewhat weak but from then on it was straight dope, off to download it
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10-19-05, 04:46 PM
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im feelin the sample. i used to watch this show sometimes.
aww why shoot him? bEAT IS cool. i think its the hook, but i dont quite like it. 1st verse - flow is real slow but still cool. cool switch up with the quick flow. chorus - very umm kinda funny but different. 2nd verse - good switch up with the faster flow. rode the beat real well. 3rd verse - prescence good like the previous 2 verses. lol @ the Phenom mention. very good. i like this verse. eww. kinda sick. 4th verse - went back to slow flow. lyrically dont like this verse. this song was cool. the chorus kinda strange. the best verse i think was the 3rd. cool beat |
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10-19-05, 04:52 PM
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lmfao at the man singin at the begining, not bad chorus and not bad singing behin, aint feelin this song at all man , no hate but seriously, i thaught this was really boring, like the voice behind, beat is kinda boring you know what i meen, no hate but only honest feed
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10-19-05, 04:56 PM
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^^^^haaa...aiight
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10-19-05, 08:26 PM
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You Cant Handle The Truth
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definetly I'd never picture this sampled but shit's hott yo...I'm actually liking the 8 bar structure of this track a lot....
intro was funny as FUCK here, you be on some complete other shit hahaa... liking the hook on this but stop cursing so damn much though lol... all the verses on this are nyce, especially the 2nd, could've done better on the 3rd but you did a good job at getting at Phenom and other dude about his cousin...shit's definetly different, nothing I've heard before beat-wise and the hook was certainly original lol...keep it up Q
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10-19-05, 10:00 PM
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LMAO....tell me thats you singing in the intro...
intro...ahahhaa LMAO...the beat is actually cool... flow is good.... i thought this was gonna be a real real funny track....but you actually came more serious in this..... hook is ok...could be a bit more catchy eww @ next to last verse lol....overall delivery was good for this type of thing i guess lol... umm this is one of those songs....its cool to hear once...honestly i dont give a shit that your gay...you are who you are....but its not a song i could listen to a lot.....for the fact i cant really relate i guess.....i dunno... but overall pretty good song...keep it up Q
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10-19-05, 10:24 PM
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^^^I appreciate the feed....But, as foreign as some of the lines in this track are to you, saying "ewww" at them is just as foreign to me...I just don't get it... 1 |
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10-19-05, 10:56 PM
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ILL GRAMMATIX... any other questions?
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yo, Q...lmao... didn't expect this to get all serious and shyt...lol... yo... this is what hip-hop is about... mad original on this joint... you doing you and that's all a nigga can ask for... beat was on point... again... different... which is a good thing.. flow was on point... maybe it's my speakers but this didn't sound as clear as ya other joints... ( i switched my speakers recently) ... liked the MR rogers sample... but i think you woulda got shot before him... he was an expert sniper in the military.... lots of kats don't know that... good shyt... keep the originality... like them other kats, i don't relate to the topic either but the way you spit it was mos def on point....holla!!!!
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