Battle Rules:

10 - 15 LINES
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

(BRING IT)

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-14-05 at 11:05 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Ryda has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-05 10:06 PM.

Big_O has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-05 10:19 PM.

Ay yo ryda i know what you are........
Thats a bitch give it up man
you got no skill your a fucked up man
Every one goes and calls you a dick ryda*
But not me.....not today I know the truth
That you are gay theres no reason to point fingers
We in massachusetts man it legal**At least thats what they say You think you gonna win man? No way
You got two wins so you think you good
you grew up in rockland man that aint the hood***
You go to rockland High thinkin you the shit
But there one little problem man you cant spit
SO i basically win your two basic......
Now man wake up its time to face it..........
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Dropped in like 5 minutes...............

*In like every battle as personal peopel call him a dick RYDA

**In Massachusetts gay marriage is legal

***I got to the same school as him

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Good Luck Man.......................................

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i assinate this MC like there is no tomorrow
this kids new name is gunna be john doe
cause afta this battle he'll be nonexistent
this kid rhymes are not consistent
kids got nuthin wit his wack rhymes hes says he's big_O
But last time i heard his win colum was Zero
thats why ur record is consealed
i got this win like a rap deal that is sealed
he's gunna lose this battle like the rest of his
wit this battle caught him off suprize like a pop quiz
he aint ready for this afta i win this battle ill be in bliss
Man this kid should just commit suicide
kids got no chance against me, battlin me it's a homicide

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good luck kid..........................................

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Voted For: Ryda

ok ur structure is a little better vocab ok but in parts the rhyme scheme is weak but better throw in multis its needed in text u had one good personal with the 0 line pretty good but u need more
big o wack kis nop flow because of ur structure vocba lacking personals where are they? elevate
rtf or i will remove my vote thank you
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Voted For: Ryda

this battle wasn't too good at all to be completely honest.
the punches were completely missing the target/non existant for real. but ryda got this one as his verse, even though there were obvious flaws, consistently attempted to rhyme, unlike big o who only started rhyming in the last 3 bars. let me break this down.

i assinate this MC like there is no tomorrow
this kids new name is gunna be john doe
^^no punch 0/10

cause afta this battle he'll be nonexistent
this kid rhymes are not consistent
^^flows weak structure is poor. statement as opposed to a punch 0/10

kids got nuthin wit his wack rhymes hes says he's big_O
But last time i heard his win colum was Zero
^^should have rhymed with "big_O" and not just "O" and the punch was weak 1/10

thats why ur record is consealed
i got this win like a rap deal that is sealed
^^rhymed the word "sealed" with itself and more self glorification than punch 0/10

he's gunna lose this battle like the rest of his
wit this battle caught him off suprize like a pop quiz
he aint ready for this afta i win this battle ill be in bliss
^^statement no punch.you shouldn't attempt three line bars just yet 0/10

Man this kid should just commit suicide
kids got no chance against me, battlin me it's a homicide
^^"suicide" and "homocide" don't rhyme and non existant punch 0/10

overall 1/60
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Ay yo ryda i know what you are........
Thats a bitch give it up man
you got no skill your a fucked up man
Every one goes and calls you a dick ryda*
But not me.....not today I know the truth
That you are gay theres no reason to point fingers
We in massachusetts man it legal**At least thats what they say You think you gonna win man? No way
^^^none of it rhymed and there were no punches 0

You got two wins so you think you good
you grew up in rockland man that aint the hood***
You go to rockland High thinkin you the shit
But there one little problem man you cant spit
SO i basically win your two basic......
Now man wake up its time to face it..........
^^^this was all garbage to be honest 0


you both really need to elevate to be honest, but ryda margnially took this one

peace

Big_O u go to rockland High too, aight uppin fo votes

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Voted For: Ryda

my vote goes to ryda for many reasons.........
1 he had the better punches. EX:
"cause afta this battle he'll be nonexistent
this kid rhymes are not consistent" and
Man this kid should just commit suicide
kids got no chance against me, battlin me it's a homicide
2 you structure is getting better just work that vocab a lil bit


-Big O....
u almost had no punches..and your strure was way off...
ounce again you gotta step up.......

This was honest feedback RTF sometime

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