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check...........................................a little too long to drop isn't it?

hows 16 lines for ya?

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=160477
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=160476
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=160479
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=160473

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yeah yeah.. 16.

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Your done.

your style lacks leadership...you're just representing duplics
cause the last time I Czech...that country is still a republic
punches? you can't present a nudge if you had eighty lines
I hate ur casual approach...hold up that's just your rhymes
said rappings your profession...yet you lack professionalism
aight go with da flow...but you & Casual just lacks Chemism
not revelant...but every word you say just lacks excellence
your lyrical style is today's world's definite...............deficit
fact is...I'm already kicking your ass but had this just began
he's deja vu, so he'd be sonned by every crew all over again
fuck rapping bitch...without 16 I still easily own & extinguish
& as a Asian...I hate to say to you that you suck at English?
And I got to say...you taken this well for someone being torn
point of Deja Vu's to ask everyone, "Have u beat me before?"
everyone's doing what Pac did...kid I'll just leave you fucked
even your D/Rs say I suck..........ing the life out of you cock

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and if you don't get the punches & personals, please shoot yourself, or just don't vote

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i'll whip this rookie... let the kid earn his stripes
cos if you're my match, then i burn ya type
ya need to learn to fight... got more than an act to clean
i don't gotta give this hoe props for him to make a scene
i'm mean... this kid's average an cas is so savage
nigga keeps a plan in his head, til i finna cracked it
strait from the lab? shit i sigh an dissed this skat
cos no scientist ever missed a fucking lab rat

well that saves me a job, cos pluto don't get 'em himself
i saturn ya verse, cos that ish came from uranus son
you had to planet for years, but still my big bang won
too much wordplay ^ ? i forget this fag's got new zeal and fight
rv's got another maori.. 'cept ya only all black on this site.

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aight...i though this was a nice battle...

yall both had good consistency, composin of a good mix of punches and personals...structure and flow was also on point for both...but i think Casual had the edge here....Plutonium, like i said, u had good consistency, but it jus didnt seem like your punches were hard-hittin enough...i felt that Cas had that *spark* in his disses, nah'mean?...anyways,

V/ Casual.....good battle yall...

This was a close battle......Pluto had a bunch of cool punches but none really hit exceptionally well, he just came consistent, while Casual started very slow, but built up to some pretty nice punches......I'm not going to say who I would have voted for cause Pluto is in my crew......cause that might be swaying

Nice battle guys..

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links to follow.

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Deja-Vu

word to that ^

kick these bitches that don't vote outta the league.. or take some points away.. even those that didn't have to drop a verse should vote.

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uppin............................................. .

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