20 line max

no biting , feeding , crew or hate votes,,,,



CHeck in

hit this up wit an honest vote and ill retun the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8270#post648270
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you better show!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
check in buddy what the fuck
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now spit u dck head.........................................

Yeah give me a few
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hit this up wit an honest vote and ill retun the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8270#post648270
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you headin on a collision with a hip-hop carnivorous creature///
you instigatin' BEEF well son, you just confronted a meat eater///
versitile slang speaker /////
with multiple rhyme features//////
I beat cha vigorously with a mic and watched you seep out the speakers //////
symbolic of the grim reaper....….//////
Doomed on your premises I lurk in the shadow of death ///
rattled your chest ////
I've become obsessed........ ////
with mutalation and coniving acts////
I could Bring Doom to his knee's with the Brutal Facts/////
makin' it hard to swallow ////
either confess that your whack and Doomed Kid///////////
or through raps I'll make you forfeit////////////
and w/ the echo of my vocals knockin this fucken planet out of orbit///////////////
your exsistence was unfortunate/////
and short-lived for that matter/////
your chitter-chatter represents a minor factor////
and whats worse.......... Doomed
I'd swear you were giving birth with that verse////
nevertheless, its gonna come off simplistic
you devised your own demise

With these lines and brutal tactics\////
You realize your shits wack and Factless

Thats the ender dont know hwy it's not there

lyrikally to phiskally you no theat/
200 post and u registered dis month making
you look like brothers with the net/

da only hot shyt from this kat
be his sig/
fire-surrounded rings beng played on by a
amatuer kid/

seriously, lets break-down syllables and
analyze this in simple terms/
each blow i deliver, leave u with swollen parts
and eternal skin-burns/

its like text in neon designs and hand made art-craft/
and i'll cut half of my verse, just for the
fairness of ur behalf/

u gotta recite just to tye, for all dat.....we coulda
took it to the mic/
but u wanted to stick with the fingaz like a lesbian
masterbated dike/
with out no-use of sum "pipe"/

u drop ridicolous with lines looking suspicous, like
they been quoted be-fo
either u recycling or biting the raw/
let me find out and imma let my caps lock you jaw/

and before da last bits of u career devour, do you
remeber De Niro?
if not, den thats the dude dat beatd you five-zero/


Doomed aka De Niro

Syn got this nice vocab, nice flow, and nice punches you get more ill every time I read your shit man

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niggaz hatin already....... fucking up my finisha!





error:

recite just to type....for all dat we
coulda took it to th mic/

Uppn
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Umm close to me, Id have to go with Synikill, he came off real brutal, punches were hard and his verse flowed good, Doomed didnt have alot of Meta4's at all but he did have good punchlines.

Vote=Synikill

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