MY NIGGA LETS GO 10 LINE S aND STRAIGHT SPiT

YEA H YO lisTEn

this bitch ass nigga ain't shit to me cause when i spit
your gonna need a hisdereckdame nigga can't you see
that your whack ass ryhmes can't even put a dent in me
li'm like flint you see spark me and i'll light up the fire and make your whole crew retire j rip mother fucker till the day your rhymes make me retire
so go back to hole you crwled out of cuase the shit i'm about to spit no one even heard of no no no you can't flow A_O so stop doing that yayo
before some one puts you down to lay yo!
hahaha

BITCH NIGGA

j-rip...bitch ass nigga talkin' shit


j-rip you done spit your shit to me and i don't see you comin'
now i have caught you in a corner with your mouth still runnin'
i can see that you the type of nigga who about that chit chat
but you won't say shit when the district ane me pull out the gat
and put a shell in your back so you can feel the burning sensation
and so we can stop your celebration for the cocane nation
your rapping game is as soft as sexuality
you a faggot nigga with no sensuality
i'm ending the shit now with my name
now you can go on and put it in your hall of fame

say something j-rip you soft ass nigga

now everybody vote cuz he say we done cuz he a bitch ass nigga
just playin'...we done though

this was one of the most weakest fucking battles ever A-o dont talk shyt u suck

aight, this wasn't the greatest of battles but i see potential on both parts, it took me a few read overs but i vote for: J-RIP

aight J-Rip had terrible structure, but once i picked up his flow i was feeling his inner rhymes and his flow as a whole, he had few punches and came weak at points, but overall your flow was the best part of this battle!

A-O: you had nice punches (you went a little to gangsta, which in my mind won't win ya any battles), your structure was way better, but i found ya flow fell off at parts(probably because ya line length changed so much and so often), you had a nice set up for a text verse, just work on your flow a bit more!

Overall you both need to work on punches, but this battle was entertaining!!


Vote: J-Rip

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Yo this battle was wack where the fuck was the good punch lines

^^ WORD < wack u need mad elvating but im going with J RIP
cos of punche s, flow and multis and creativty.

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close battle but im going wit j-rip

flow=ao
punches=j rip
crativity= j rip (not really none anyway)

vote=j rip

************* look at nature vs nevadat and plz vote ( i need one more for K.O)

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flow=ao
punches=ao
creativity=j rip
vocab=tie

I think ao came a bit harder with the punches in my opinion.. so ao wins it by punches

J got it with Personals but it was weak and close

J=4/10
ao=3.5/10

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