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Beat: Not sure who produced...Thank to Cho for finding it for me

Hook: Written and performed by Q

Verses: 1, 2, 3, Q


Intro: A Preacher is denouncing gays from the biblical book of Leviticus while the choir eggs him on with a rendition of "Amen". Then, the message is reversed and the first verse kicks in.

Concept: I saw a movie called "Almost Normal" where homosexuality was the "norm" and heterosexuality was unaccepted. It inspired me to tackle that theme as a song. I recognize that not all straight people are homophobes, but I took the extreme on this song and made gay people heterophobes to make the bigotry more noticeable.

Outro: The straight character in the story, Kyle, is being harassed at the prom.

Holla atcha boy


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Listenin' dayumm...tha intro is real talk, thats very clever...lyrics are tha best ive heard from you, flow is very good, dayum Im realy lovin' this song....i respect you fo makin this song nigga...im likin da story your makin in da 2nd verse lol makes people think..I really enjoyed how you flipped the story..damn this is da best song rv has had...easily...i really respect u fo this song..hook is good too...quality too is good...3rd verse is good...like tha story again...n how u flipped it damn i really like this song...kyle came with a chick..fuckin wrong haha this is so real...this is summin special...and outro is real too i feel this all tha way thru...my first ever but:

10/10

found no flaws....

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lol, love tha beat man

good approach...contraversial shit here....like the vocals u laid on the hook...nice lil story line n shit...will proly make a few heads think bout some shit...concept n all was good..don't b tryna straight bash me tho !!

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HELLLZ YEEAHH !!!!

This shit is hot man.....definitely. Hook is nice, wasn't feeling it that much the first time I heard the hook, but then it grew on me

This track bangs man....everything from the flow to the delivery to the lyrics....solid ™

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this is a hot as track im lovin it the very good story it fits your voice perfectly
i give it a 10 out of 10 on creativity the lyrics i give you 9.5 great lyrics the theme was just increadible
you are being so original i love that
over all i give you a 9.7/10 your i like how you where straight forward with your lyrics

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yeah most def. a dope track dog... i am a breeder... so what ... anyway ...theres not much i can tell you to do about your quality except go to a studio.. but how you flipped the script and its as if the norms of society are reversed is the sickness. the story is good too... thanks for shoutin me out in the song too... i'll be a breeder .. as soon as some bitch gets naked around here.. damn ... where all the hoes at... i'm right here with some dick for you come and get it bitches... (women only) not you bitch ass rappers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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beat fits perfect with your words...your flow is on point...voice and emotion stays through out the song...clear message, lyrics were ridiculous....def one of the best on Rv... 10/10.....

shits dope loc. shits deep, makes u think. good lyrics, dope beat. nuthin wrong wif it. lmao @ my short ass feedback :S but i got nuthin bad 2 say so werd

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ight listenin..

flow-5/5 nice shit on beat original
presence-5/5
delivery-5/5
lyrics-5/5 real talk i was thinkin about shit like this the other day..good concept

not too much to say im really feelin this song real talk
overall 4.9/5

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incredibly creative a unique approach from the common threads being soen in the rap game glad you using ya noggin and doin you thats when ya tracks shyne the most completely different aspect from a different often unheard side of things nice job here!

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Hmmm wow..actually is the best i've heard from you..the quality seems most clear and your delivery is at its best and able to hear every lyric u spit. all ya verses were good ...my favorite was the second tho...lol@the chorus..str8 bashing.. meaning? hetero bashing? lol. but this shit is hott on real ...this is indeed new dopeness..

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