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I made a mistake seein' the movie, I shouldn't have looked
Ur PROOF the cliche's true, the movie is never as good as the book
Ur movies have all flopped n' its a fact that I heard
I ain't talkin' terrorism when I say The Two Towers crashed n' burned
Only nerds watch ur shit, those stuck with computers
Here's a challenge, find me ONE kid who's seen the trilogy that isn't a loser
Now, the lands of the battles that went down showed hurt beings
I saw Return of the King had Minas Tirith... and minas anything worth seeing
But that battle moved onto other places until there was victory
I then saw Pelennor Field...one of the weakest battles in history

..Harry Potter movies are horrible, idunno how the hell it made the top hits,
but one thing is true the protagonist first name well describes ya girls armpits
..I'm hungry for a win, all that witchcraft aint even heard of'
instead you should decide which craft to choose... selling or flippin ham - burgers.
the golden boys here to murder ya, lord of the rings ready to bring ya team losses,
an Oscar? bitch then i'll turn into muhammad ali the way i jabbed you at the Box office.
This fucker will choke, when he realises all the fuckin records i've broke,
ur creators first name is J.K. .... n we all can see you're nothin more than a joke.
ppl look out for deals you know and this bitch has the other clowns back,
and when they see that they'll warn'er brothers... so harry potter'll lose his contract.

vote!! !

ok
DATRUSHURTZ
I made a mistake seein' the movie, I shouldn't have looked
Ur PROOF the cliche's true, the movie is never as good as the book
----- OK OPENER-----
Ur movies have all flopped n' its a fact that I heard
I ain't talkin' terrorism when I say The Two Towers crashed n' burned
-----THIS WAS OK AGAIN-----
Only nerds watch ur shit, those stuck with computers
Here's a challenge, find me ONE kid who's seen the trilogy that isn't a loser
-----LIKING THIS BAR, BEST SO FAR-----
Now, the lands of the battles that went down showed hurt beings
I saw Return of the King had Minas Tirith... and minas anything worth seeing
-----LIKING THE WORDPLAY, NICE BAR-----
But that battle moved onto other places until there was victory
I then saw Pelennor Field...one of the weakest battles in history
-----NOTHING SPECIAL, AIGHT THO-----

all in all i rekon this was a good verse, flowed nice, the punches were ok, not as hard hitting as they could be, but still a dope drop.....

AERAL
..Harry Potter movies are horrible, idunno how the hell it made the top hits,
but one thing is true the protagonist first name well describes ya girls armpits
-----NICE OPENER, BUT I FEEL THE PUNCH WAS A LIL WEAK, PROPS THO, KINDA FUNNY-----
..I'm hungry for a win, all that witchcraft aint even heard of'
instead you should decide which craft to choose... selling or flippin ham - burgers.
-----THIS WASNT TO BAD MAN, PLAYED PUNCH THO-----
the golden boys here to murder ya, lord of the rings ready to bring ya team losses,
an Oscar? bitch then i'll turn into muhammad ali the way i jabbed you at the Box office.
-----NOT REALLY FEELING THIS-----
This fucker will choke, when he realises all the fuckin records i've broke,
ur creators first name is J.K. .... n we all can see you're nothin more than a joke.
-----LIKED THIS BAR, BEST SO FAR MAN-----
ppl look out for deals you know and this bitch has the other clowns back,
and when they see that they'll warn'er brothers... so harry potter'll lose his contract.
-----OK CLOSER-----

aight i was feeling ya verse man...thought it was cool...like the J.K. punch, that shit was nice...with u two i feel like the verses are pretty much on the same level...they both flowed ok, had ok punches, with the exception of a nice punch from each of u guys...close battle in my opinion but ima go wiv datrushurtz coz i prefered his punches...aeral dropped a few dissin his girl, and bout flippin burgers, and im feelin thats played...

vote DATRUSHURTZ

can you give me a link of someone using my wichcraft punch? cos i have never ever seen that shit anywhere online ^

Vote - DaTrusHurtz

I liked both of these verses, and I felt this battle was pretty much even. The reason I choose Trus is because I felt he was more consistent with good punches. His best line was "Now, the lands of the battles that went down showed hurt beings
I saw Return of the King had Minas Tirith... and minas anything worth seeing" and that was pretty hard hitting. Aeral your shit wasn't bad, but I just didn't feel it connecting as hard as Trus. Your best line was "..Harry Potter movies are horrible, idunno how the hell it made the top hits,
but one thing is true the protagonist first name well describes ya girls armpits"

Good battle.

DaTrusHurtz

I made a mistake seein' the movie, I shouldn't have looked
Ur PROOF the cliche's true, the movie is never as good as the book
Good flow, punch connected
Ur movies have all flopped n' its a fact that I heard
I ain't talkin' terrorism when I say The Two Towers crashed n' burned
^- Ok, decent with the flippin'
Only nerds watch ur shit, those stuck with computers
Here's a challenge, find me ONE kid who's seen the trilogy that isn't a loser
^- lol ok
Now, the lands of the battles that went down showed hurt beings
I saw Return of the King had Minas Tirith... and minas anything worth seeing
^- lol didnt quite get it but i understoon the end
But that battle moved onto other places until there was victory
I then saw Pelennor Field...one of the weakest battles in history
^- Not the strongest closer

Aeral

..Harry Potter movies are horrible, idunno how the hell it made the top hits,
but one thing is true the protagonist first name well describes ya girls armpits
^- lol ok
..I'm hungry for a win, all that witchcraft aint even heard of'
instead you should decide which craft to choose... selling or flippin ham - burgers.
^- ha, i liked the flow a bit but the punch wasnt hard
the golden boys here to murder ya, lord of the rings ready to bring ya team losses,
an Oscar? bitch then i'll turn into muhammad ali the way i jabbed you at the Box office.
^-Eh, muhammad ali lines are played
This fucker will choke, when he realises all the fuckin records i've broke,
ur creators first name is J.K. .... n we all can see you're nothin more than a joke.
^- Couldve worded it better but ok
ppl look out for deals you know and this bitch has the other clowns back,
and when they see that they'll warn'er brothers... so harry potter'll lose his contract.
^- Not the best closer either

Overal - DaTrusHurtz came with the overal better verse, niether had a good closer but i liked DaTrust opener better, flow was good throughout and had more consistant stronger punches, structure wise both were about the same, but for originality DaTrus got it.

Vote - DaTrusHurtz

I made a mistake seein' the movie, I shouldn't have looked
Ur PROOF the cliche's true, the movie is never as good as the book
Now, the lands of the battles that went down showed hurt beings
I saw Return of the King had Minas Tirith... and minas anything worth seeing

vs.

..I'm hungry for a win, all that witchcraft aint even heard of'
instead you should decide which craft to choose... selling or flippin ham - burgers.
(I guess)



I honestly expected a lot more from Aeral. Some of his punches weren't even flipped just simple statements. Trus did that too, but it wasn't as frequent. The warner brothers one could have been quoted too, but I've heard and seen that warn a brother shit too much. It's getting Annoying. Either way, Trus had more quotables and a more solid verse with his non-quotables, so he gets my vote.

V/ DaTrusHurtz

I made a mistake seein' the movie, I shouldn't have looked
Ur PROOF the cliche's true, the movie is never as good as the book
Ur movies have all flopped n' its a fact that I heard
I ain't talkin' terrorism when I say The Two Towers crashed n' burned
Only nerds watch ur shit, those stuck with computers
Here's a challenge, find me ONE kid who's seen the trilogy that isn't a loser
Now, the lands of the battles that went down showed hurt beings

^Your last 4 lines werent as hard hitting and kinda ended dissapointingly. Overall solid verse though.

vs.
This fucker will choke, when he realises all the fuckin records i've broke,
ur creators first name is J.K. .... n we all can see you're nothin more than a joke.
ppl look out for deals you know and this bitch has the other clowns back,
and when they see that they'll warn'er brothers... so harry potter'll lose his contract.

^you coulda done way more with that last line.

Becuz of consistency, my vote is:

V-DaTrusHurtz