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i'll prob go about 16 lines

Word, whoever drops first. the second person has to match.

Good luck

We're both John Travolta fans, he's obviously 1st place and shit
But your bitch is such a fan of Grease she's fucking covered her face in it
Your wife's the hulk, an angry slut who could tear apart anyone with a dick
Fucked off heroine...
...Also describes what you have to be to look as bad as you in a pic
Your brows are fading so fast they're soon to be buried and small
I'd say they're starting to resemble your skills... but you never had any at all
Your co stars hate you, and described blowing you off stage as groovy
& If something ever Stuck On You...
...It was Greg Kineear's faeces as he shit all over you in that movie
What the fuck at your eyes? One's more shadowed than most are
& The other's pale in comparrison...
...Just you when you're compared to your co stars

first battle... and i end up versing this faggot
with a face so orange..
i thought it was gonna be Matt Damon vs a Carrot
sure you went out with J Lo but to this day it's untold
coz it was a classic bad relationship.. like you with a good role
and fuck it even if you did play it well you're soft as fuck
i mean hell, even when you have an headache you rush to hospital
honest son, you suck in like, all aspects of actin'
and it's obvious you not fondeling my balls anymore..
has affected your catching!
the fact is, your actin' status, it's not high
stretched, whack, played, soon to come to an end..
sorry, i was just describing your career and apocs lines



sorry aobut it being late i was waiting for him to drop

votes:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3143208

Vote - Appocolyptik

Well SwervEz you only had one good punch and that was the bar about "the good role". The rest was really disorganized and felt forced to me all together. Appoc, your verse had some decent punches in it, but a lot of it was fillers and some felt forced as well. But you had enough to edge it out. My favorite bar from your verse was the one about John Travolta and his bitch being greasy lol

Oh wow Sweverez showed? I dropped a no show verse not expecting him to drop...

But in that case let the votes commence, thanks for voting Syntax.

yeah i like keyed it in 10 mins lol

Appocolyptik:
We're both John Travolta fans, he's obviously 1st place and shit
But your bitch is such a fan of Grease she's fucking covered her face in it
Nice Opener
Your wife's the hulk, an angry slut who could tear apart anyone with a dick
Fucked off heroine...
...Also describes what you have to be to look as bad as you in a pic
nah
Your brows are fading so fast they're soon to be buried and small
I'd say they're starting to resemble your skills... but you never had any at all
niice
Your co stars hate you, and described blowing you off stage as groovy
& If something ever Stuck On You...
...It was Greg Kineear's faeces as he shit all over you in that movie
haha, word.
What the fuck at your eyes? One's more shadowed than most are
& The other's pale in comparrison...
...Just you when you're compared to your co stars
meh closer.

You had a couple gay lines in there, but the rest was pretty decent, you def. ripped him apart.


SwervEz:
first battle... and i end up versing this faggot
with a face so orange..
i thought it was gonna be Matt Damon vs a Carrot
decent opener
sure you went out with J Lo but to this day it's untold
coz it was a classic bad relationship.. like you with a good role
niice
and fuck it even if you did play it well you're soft as fuck
i mean hell, even when you have an headache you rush to hospital
meh
honest son, you suck in like, all aspects of actin'
and it's obvious you not fondeling my balls anymore..
has affected your catching!
nah
the fact is, your actin' status, it's not high
stretched, whack, played, soon to come to an end..
sorry, i was just describing your career and apocs lines
bad closer

You verse started off pretty good, and then it slowly fell apart. I thought you were goin' to have it after the first few lines, but then it just went downhill.



Vote - Apoc. (He had the better verse in my opinon)

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Word, it was a no show verse which explains the filler lines.

Thanks for voting

Appocolyptik

We're both John Travolta fans, he's obviously 1st place and shit
But your bitch is such a fan of Grease she's fucking covered her face in it
^- lol decent punch
Your wife's the hulk, an angry slut who could tear apart anyone with a dick
Fucked off heroine...
...Also describes what you have to be to look as bad as you in a pic
^- Flow was a lil choppy n didnt hit that hard
Your brows are fading so fast they're soon to be buried and small
I'd say they're starting to resemble your skills... but you never had any at all
^-Alright
Your co stars hate you, and described blowing you off stage as groovy
& If something ever Stuck On You...
...It was Greg Kineear's faeces as he shit all over you in that movie
^-Never saw it but ok
What the fuck at your eyes? One's more shadowed than most are
& The other's pale in comparrison...
...Just you when you're compared to your co stars
^- lol ok

Swervez

first battle... and i end up versing this faggot
with a face so orange..
i thought it was gonna be Matt Damon vs a Carrot
^- lol decent
sure you went out with J Lo but to this day it's untold
coz it was a classic bad relationship.. like you with a good role
^- Good punch
and fuck it even if you did play it well you're soft as fuck
i mean hell, even when you have an headache you rush to hospital
^- Was soft
honest son, you suck in like, all aspects of actin'
and it's obvious you not fondeling my balls anymore..
has affected your catching!
^- a lil nasty but ok, fondeling balls is never cool!
the fact is, your actin' status, it's not high
stretched, whack, played, soon to come to an end..
sorry, i was just describing your career and apocs lines
^-lol ok


Overal- I liked Swervez's opener better but Appocolyptik came consistant throughout with his punches, flow was ok for the most part, some stumbling in each but structure wise they were pretty equal, and originality i'd say Appoc had it.

Vote- Appocolyptik

We're both John Travolta fans, he's obviously 1st place and shit
But your bitch is such a fan of Grease she's fucking covered her face in it
Your co stars hate you, and described blowing you off stage as groovy
& If something ever Stuck On You...
...It was Greg Kineear's faeces as he shit all over you in that movie

vs.

first battle... and i end up versing this faggot
with a face so orange..
i thought it was gonna be Matt Damon vs a Carrot



Blah, I didn't really like much of SwervEz verse and I thought this was pretty onesided. Appoc had more quotables, less filler and a more solid overall verse. Not much more I could say, but that's why he gets my vote.

V/ Appocolyptik

We're both John Travolta fans, he's obviously 1st place and shit
But your bitch is such a fan of Grease she's fucking covered her face in it
Your co stars hate you, and described blowing you off stage as groovy
& If something ever Stuck On You...
...It was Greg Kineear's faeces as he shit all over you in that movie

vs.


first battle... and i end up versing this faggot
with a face so orange..
i thought it was gonna be Matt Damon vs a Carrot
sure you went out with J Lo but to this day it's untold
coz it was a classic bad relationship.. like you with a good role

This battle was actually kinda close in quotables, but Swerv fell off hard in his last 3 bars after a nice start. Appoc was more consistent tho obviously a rushed verse so he got this.

Vote - Appocolyptik