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Old 05-02-04, 12:34 AM   #1
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its all a hustle (my first audio)
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yeah this the first real audio ive ever done.. i can take all the criticizm possible

so spit it out

here it is

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/mcpatmusic.htm
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Old 05-02-04, 01:10 AM   #2
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song aint cleared yet
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Old 05-02-04, 01:33 AM   #3
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word? shit aiight it will be up by tommorow then
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Old 05-02-04, 01:35 AM   #4
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ill peep it then
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Old 05-02-04, 09:59 PM   #5
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aight... your flow could use some help... doesn't match the music 100%... its nice places but in some places its kinda off. lyrics weren't that great... nice beat... your deliery is also a bit off at some places, and it seems like your mic aint great (mines worse though...)
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Old 05-02-04, 11:31 PM   #6
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yea flow was delivered right in some areas and if it was a freestyle it was pretty decent thats what it sounded like cause it was some hesitation through the flow lol and dont breath into the mic and get to now the beat better and youll eat that beat up
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Old 05-02-04, 11:35 PM   #7
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lol.. aiight man im a work on that shit more
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Old 05-06-04, 12:03 AM   #8
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decent,but yea you need to wrok on flow,and add a bit of complexity to your shit.respect for elevaitin tho
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Old 05-06-04, 12:06 AM   #9
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hey chow check out that triumph joint of mine
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