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04-30-07, 08:18 PM
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Above Originality
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Contendor Match: Thomas (2-1) vs. Pious (2-1)
IP: 9465 0DDF
ok i expect you two writers to get off to a wonderful start here by really proving who can write. now this is week 4 so its almost that time were we will cut two cus only 16 can make the playoffs so strive to be the best. Battles up: April 29 Verses Due: May 4th Your Picture of the week is...  Good Luck 
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05-01-07, 03:07 AM
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Flyweight
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IP: 5CD1 33E7
Check man. Goodluck.
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05-03-07, 07:39 PM
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IP: 969B 73F9
ive never written to a picture before... go easy on me
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05-04-07, 02:12 PM
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IP: 5CD1 33E7
Each footstep is an emotion, It weilds pain or happiness, For the one i love i shall walk forever and always. She breathes essence into my bones and aroma into the very air that i breath. For she is my life. Each footstep shows my lifes ambitions, and what i am to achieve. Each footstep is a sound inpediment, one is nature, one is love, one is hatred yet most of all one is HER. Ask yourself have you ever woke up in the morning, looked outside the window and sighed, well i do it because of here, she breathes air in my lungs, she gets me out of bed in the morning, she is my light, she is my darkness, yet she is the one who gets me up in the at the break of dawn, and she walks with me, she walks my footsteps and brings me back to heaven, I am her and she is me... she is my Aphrodiaté, but best of all... she is everyone of my god for saken footsteps. |
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05-06-07, 10:12 AM
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The Write Weight
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IP: EF6E DF27
v/ Pious
I'm not going in-depth feed. Just voting. Pious - Good verse, maybe add some more length for better writers. Nice multies, nice shit. Thomas - You came with poetry, which is decent, but then again. Rhymescheme is a bit more catchy, and unless your opponent is going poetry, you are shit outta luck, because 9 times out of 10, the guy with rhymes will win. |
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05-06-07, 04:00 PM
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IP: BD5A E73F
Vote : Pious
Yep, as Jonathon said - no indepth stuff today. Pious - a really close battle but you pulled this off with your rhymescheme and the complexity yet good quality of your verse. I must say - this was pretty good. It reminds me of - well - my style a little bit reflected, but nevertheless this was dope. Thomas - a cool verse, kind of a little sticky ice-cream little verse but some grammatical little things to fix in there. Alright verse though.
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05-06-07, 04:04 PM
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IP: BD5A E73F
Pious wins, 2-0.
Thomas (2-2) - Pious (3-1)
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