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Old 07-21-05, 06:23 AM   #1
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Talking My Love (Mahal Ko) Feat. My Girlfriend

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This is my favorite song so far.. why? it took me 30 hours to write n record this song... n 80% of the time i wrote n recorded this i was on fone with my girl lol.. she's talking in the beginging n stuff.. n yeah.. i mix'd it alot.. quality is okay.. but wen i get a good mic i'll re-record it.. n take the 20 hours to re-record it cuz its that good.. in this song i sing in tagalog in the chorus and speak tagalog (filipino) at the outro..

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/dabatos_music.htm

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Lyrics for "Mahal Ko My Love"

Translation:
mahal Ko = My Love
salamat ng dito ka = Thank You For Being Here
Mahal ko.. = My Love
gusta ko malaman mo.. = I want you to know
I thank God Your in my life..
hindi ko alam kung ano mangyayari sa akin kung wala kah:
I Dont know where i'd be without you.

(Chorus)

mahal Ko
salamat ng dito ka
My Love..
Thank you for being here..
Mahal ko..
gusta ko malaman mo..
I thank God Your in my life..

(Verse 1)
Imma talk bout this girl that changed my life..
And soon to be Mrs. Dabatos the greatest wife..
Remember like yesturday. was insane that tonight.
Just chilled n cuddled by the fire flames oh so tight...
Looked into each other's eyes, than became lovers right..
Then our lips touch'd, didnt let go untill the sun rise..
Than the next day we went under stars..
Starin into the skies while in my arms.
I wish i may I wish I might..
To always be with the girl im with tonight..
There's only one true girl, n i believe its she..
Since she was the only one that ever loved me for me..

(Chorus)

mahal Ko
salamat ng dito ka
My Love..
Thank you for being here..
Mahal ko..
gusta ko malaman mo..
I thank God Your in my life..

(Verse 2)
Aint it funny baby how i love every little thing about you...
Its the atmosphere around you, guess angels really sorround you..'
Baby girl its fact, gave me feelins i've never felt..
Just hearing your laugh....makes me want u all to my self..
Anyways, i promise girl that i will be there for you any day..
Baby girl I promise that i will love you plenty ways..
Just let me say, my baby girl that I aint lyin at all..
Your my advil, Promise to be your tylenol..
It aint my fault that we fell in love with each other..
I guess that baby girl we're jst ment to be lovers..
I always use to think that angels only lived in heaven.
But i know im wrong, cuz theres one here in my possesion..

(Chorus)
mahal Ko
salamat ng dito ka
My Love..
Thank you for being here..
Mahal ko..
gusta ko malaman mo..
I thank God Your in my life..

(Verse 3)
your the reason thre reason im breathen..
Only time im weak's when i dont see u in the weekends..
U can trust me with your life, i'll never be cheatin..
Since i will always be with you all of the four seasons..
And believe it, and dont ever be in denial..
I'll alays be next to you, number one on my speed dial..
And baby i'll do anything, even go local..
And sing to you with my heart sing these vocals..


Outro:

I dont know where I'd be without you..
hindi ko alam kung ano mangyayari sa akin kung wala kah
I will never leave you forever
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Old 07-21-05, 06:35 AM   #2
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hmm to be honest i dont really like the beat, the hook isn't to bad the you have so much pops in ya mic though when ya sing but thats because of the mic, mine sounds the same but the flow isn't to bad delivery isn't to bad could use a little work, but your gettin better, just not really feelin the beat man.

good shit though 1
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Old 07-21-05, 06:45 AM   #3
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its kinda cool cause its something different..and because its filipino...

....didnt really like it though..the hook was pretty gay..i would give it a 6/10
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Old 07-21-05, 07:02 AM   #4
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phone convo cud be louder...cud barely hear ur girl


beat is aiigh...kinda Hawaii Five-oh ish


singing reminded me of Bone THugs at first...decent


and yea, u cud stand for more vocal presence

otherwise, ur flow/delivery aren't bad for what ur tryin to accomplish

not a bad track

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Old 07-21-05, 11:51 AM   #5
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this is some dope shit yo
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Old 07-21-05, 05:08 PM   #6
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lol... thanx for the feed ya....really appreciate it
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Old 07-21-05, 07:54 PM   #7
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I don't like this as much as your previous songs. Though I really like your beats. Your lyrics get rushed a lot, and the phone convo is really bad quality. Awww how cute . Haha, overall I like this song, but you need to get your flow better and the phone convo better quality. Lyrics were ok.
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Old 07-21-05, 08:02 PM   #8
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lol.. how cute haha.. but yeah she was on fone while i recorded her..but thanx for feed familia
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