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01-11-09, 05:59 PM
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Hell yeah
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Speats - They Used To Hate Me
IP: 37F9 4421
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01-12-09, 07:58 AM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: F1DD 42EB
song about getting picked on as a kid?
not bad man... the vocals are good, production is tight... its sell-able.... hooks sort of catchy.. dont really have much constructive critisism... hence my short response... its a little short thats my only critic... should usually try and aim for 3:30 to 4:00... thats what radios generally like.. didnt mind this at all tho.. |
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01-14-09, 01:31 PM
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inFAMOUS
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IP: 55BC 579E
nice
its been awhile since i heard ur songs u got better |
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01-14-09, 03:18 PM
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10:23 till i'm 86
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IP: DD1C 59F7
odd why u dont have it at the top. like the hook, accent is kinda funny, i like it when u switch your voice on the hook, and when u get like a lil grimy in parts, im thinkin u should lower your voice a lil on the verse, the hook when your singin is ill, it makes me wanna get a verse on it for real. easy topic to spit to. good shit, on thing i got to improve is to play with your voice a lil more to show more emotion, cuz the parts u did sounded the best.
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01-17-09, 02:58 PM
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I don't lose
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IP: B8CD 558F
hmmmm...what if they still hate you?
i think you could add to the song if you dubbed EACH used to hate me...made it seperate from the track...somehing better... i like the vocal inflections..... i also think you should have some extra shit in your hook, panned left and right.... make it bigger, its catchy but make it so it sticks in your head no matter what.... flow is all the same i feel i want more switch ups from verse to verse.... the biach needs to be emphasised more...make it like biachhhhhhhhhhhhh good stuff tho, make the hook bigger.....work on the little things...cuz thats all that needs work...
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