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01-29-09, 01:51 PM
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text.even geico can do it
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Cronos-Logs for Pyre
IP: 8F6F 6851
I did nothing special with it, no adlibs and recorded it on only a half decent mic, this isn't the final product, only a taste of what I can do. it'll be finished when the mixtape drops. I advice you close your eyes and drown out any distractions you might face while listening. production by CH3
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01-29-09, 02:17 PM
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New to RV
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IP: BE3B 6B0A
I wish this site had the embedded player feature... oh well...
your delivery is pretty decent on this, better than I've heard from you before... mic presence could be a bit stronger yet... flow is pretty much on point too, a bit choppy here and there, could smooth it out some... lyrics is straight... this has potential, finish it up yo...
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01-29-09, 02:19 PM
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What' it do?
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IP: 9FBF 8B23
Yeah son, vocals arent that bad mad. flow sounds good, like keep said it just sounds choppy in points. and occasionally sounds like your out of breath. But your wordplay and vocabulary in this is sick. Def, potential. Look forward to havin you in V4V, dope shit. keep it up.
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01-29-09, 02:26 PM
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text.even geico can do it
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IP: 8F6F 6851
thanks keebs, stubbs
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01-29-09, 03:03 PM
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IP: 28AD 5545
this beat is alright..mix needs alot of work..nice wordplay..flow is good but at times you fell off a bit..content of this song is pretty good..this was all around pretty str8..
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01-29-09, 03:25 PM
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10:23 till i'm 86
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IP: DD1C 59F7
if you gunna say stuff that deep, u gunna have to have an insane more amount of emotion and mic presence. sounds like you're just saying deep shit just to say it. sounds like your just trying to say things you think are cool and not sayin what u really feel. seems fake to me, like its good if u sounded like u felt what u were saying, but it just doesn't seem that way to me.
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01-29-09, 03:51 PM
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text.even geico can do it
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IP: 8F6F 6851
lol at me saying shit just to say it. wooow, I guess I'll have to think about that one a bit. maybe cut my wrists a little before i record or something.
thanks for the feeds though |
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01-29-09, 05:58 PM
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I don't lose
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IP: 1058 C353
it feels like you just started recording...youve been rapping but you just started recording, eh? sell your story more. you gotta hamm that shit up to make it utterly obvoius you believe what your rappin bout. and your quality is blah, vocals are toooo loud...the beat is your friend trust me, dont bury it like that.... cuz more beat will add more emotion...some other minor recording errors but nothing i could bang out n fix with one post... not bad on the rap part tho....just keep checking out tutorials and growing with your mixes....
return some feed on my shit tho man...tell me what you think http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=248362
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