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Old 10-15-05, 10:10 AM   #1
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I Need To Be An Artist.

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I need to be an Artist

I lust for the depression, the aggression art holds
The obsession to make an impression as a possession unfolds
The moulds of a true artist, I let my mind go wondering
Sometimes opens my eyes to success, or I go blind from blundering
Thundering pains in my head, from powders ive snorted
I don’t do it for the image, but to get that image distorted
Unsupported and unstable, living in my studio of mood swings
A bottle, some chalk and paint what ever my mood brings
Ive screwed rings of companions up,
Friends have been lost forever
I’m hoping that like my art, I rip them
Then they come back together,
My head is the weather, but rains what it often releases
Art was my confidence boost, delivered messages in my pieces
It increases my amount of depression, I have an obsession for pain
My minds on a simple plain but far from simple and plain
Cocaine assists this chalk to the paper, makes inspiration flow
Without it my mind is blank like this paper, allows the foundation to grow
And although this hobby eats away at me, and cuts of my health
I need to be an artist because art is an art in its self
Himself and I are attached simply matched with a passion
Of displaying our naked images in our own kind of fashion
Satisfaction is a bonus, my body now floats as a vapor
Rushing threw life none existent from pieces of paper.

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Old 10-15-05, 10:18 AM   #2
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Woooo That Was Tite Nigga....

Liked Da Wording, Imagery, Flow, Concept, Etc Etc....10/10



Dats Real^
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Old 10-16-05, 01:19 AM   #3
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So, what alias are you?

I'll be honest, this was a great drop. I thought the rhyming at the start was a bit forced, like you had abit of writers block and were looking for a way to kick it off, but it gradually got better and better and became an easier read. This drop was art too. Alot of metaphorical things and just makes other artists respect what they're doing and love what they're doing, which is good. Fav Line:

Friends have been lost forever
I’m hoping that like my art, I rip them
Then they come back together

And although this hobby eats away at me, and cuts of my health
I need to be an artist because art is an art in its self
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Old 10-16-05, 10:52 AM   #4
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no alais...just of another site yo.
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Old 10-16-05, 01:45 PM   #5
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Well this was a dope peice..but i need you to drop two links or this will be closed
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Old 10-16-05, 10:23 PM   #6
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nice piece man, like the imagery and emotion that was driving in the piece. And being an artist isn't what its cracked up to be, b/c your never good enuff either 4 urself or for others...livin that.. piece 10/10
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Old 10-17-05, 04:05 PM   #7
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you got legends or any shit other here?



mal i will get them links 2moz man dw.
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Old 10-17-05, 09:12 PM   #8
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DAMN!!!!

that is good..... Original topic n shit

the multi's is hot!!! Vocab intense... nice drop 10/10
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Old 10-17-05, 09:45 PM   #9
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thats smooth my man, very effective combination of flow, imagery and passion....this was well written with definate understanding of how to apply everything into one imaginative, expressive piece....very well done, and was very pleasant to read, mainly because you didn't sapp it with heavy vocab, but you have understanding and had appropriate knowledge to use words effectively......well done.

rtf on my piece up in da OM.
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Old 10-18-05, 11:17 AM   #10
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YUP.


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Old 10-24-05, 08:43 PM   #11
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DAMN THIS WAS GOOD IT KEPT INTENSE DRAMA IT VERY DIFFICLT TO WRITE THIS WAY ENJOYED THIS PIECE FOR REAL YO IMAGE FANTASTIC I LOVED THIS SECOND PART MOST OF ALL RIGHT HERE DAWG KEEP ON REPPING

LEFT]Ive screwed rings of companions up,[/LEFT]
Friends have been lost forever
I’m hoping that like my art, I rip them
Then they come back together,
My head is the weather, but rains what it often releases
Art was my confidence boost, delivered messages in my pieces
It increases my amount of depression, I have an obsession for pain
My minds on a simple plain but far from simple and plain
Cocaine assists this chalk to the paper, makes inspiration flow
Without it my mind is blank like this paper, allows the foundation to grow
And although this hobby eats away at me, and cuts of my health
I need to be an artist because art is an art in its self
Himself and I are attached simply matched with a passion
Of displaying our naked images in our own kind of fashion
Satisfaction is a bonus, my body now floats as a vapor
Rushing threw life none existent from pieces of paper.[/CENTER]
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