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Old 10-07-09, 08:30 PM   #16
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"i've seen harder punches in kool-aid jars"

lmfao could you get anymore played?

That's not played, just wack.
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Old 10-07-09, 08:37 PM   #17
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^ lol yea it is but the concept in general of punch/fruit punch is played as fuck lol

and that was one of the worst wordings of that puch ive ever seen...
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Old 10-08-09, 06:28 PM   #18
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it was 2003 you dick.it wasnt a played punch then.damn you get dumber and dumber.of course battle verses from 6 years ago would have old punches now.how can you be so dumb?i wish you lived close to me so i could beat the shit outta you.


i'd cut your head off with my samurai sword....

and yea, I been hearing Big L use that fruit punch line lmao, so dont tell me it wasn't played, bitch
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Old 10-09-09, 03:09 PM   #19
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^name three people who said it or anything like it before 2004 you dick.you cant.YOUR played.corny ass suburban faggots who wanna pretend to be tough.certainly played.
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Old 10-09-09, 05:03 PM   #20
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YOUR played.corny ass suburban faggots who wanna pretend to be tough.certainly played.

e-G's. certainly NOT played. better watch out jtr. lol
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Old 10-10-09, 09:47 AM   #21
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YOUR played.corny ass

Didn't you try to call yourself Ghetto Shakespeare at some point?
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Old 10-10-09, 11:24 AM   #22
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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=216099

^^ here is the man who claims to be all knowledgable about hip-hop...

the man who realised he was so wack he'd have a better chance in the rap game writing other peoples music for them, but the only person who let his wack ass ghost for him was his cousin

better than anything you could ever spit, cuz you're an erogant bitch and he actually spits some true shit, and you're so blind u could never spit anything even parcially true
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Old 10-10-09, 11:26 AM   #23
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for all the shit he talks... it's pretty damn bad bro...


this coming from you, wow you're a fag

you talk so much shit that if it were true you'd be a billinaire from your music, yet i haven't even heard a single song of yours that i can get through with out turning off because its so bad.
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u are a jew that wants to be asian, no one wants to hear your story. eat shit
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u are a jew that wants to be asian, no one wants to hear your story

lmfao hahahahahahahahhahahahahhahaha 'dead'
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Old 10-10-09, 06:09 PM   #25
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this coming from you, wow you're a fag

you talk so much shit that if it were true you'd be a billinaire from your music, yet i haven't even heard a single song of yours that i can get through with out turning off because its so bad.
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u are a jew that wants to be asian, no one wants to hear your story. eat shit


Lmao I already am Asian sucker, part of russia is located in asia and that's the part my grandparents are from.

I can't spit true shit? Ok...

I will corrupt you
Worse then the system that’s out there to fuck you
Worse then that first girl who you thought loved you
‘Til she broke your heart, put you down and dumped you
You are not ready; you should not be hearing this
The truth is a scary thing and I know that you fear this shit
Like how the fuck could one plane bring down a tower?
I want to bring down the white house, and bring down the cowards
Who lied about Roswell like it can’t still be serious?
Well then who the fuck do you think built the pyramids?
You’re hopeless and laugh like it’s a load of some trash
But you’re the same person who thinks Moses split an ocean in half
Well if that’s possible then I don’t know what the fuck isn’t
Colours seem different when they’re seen through a prism
The ghetto needs more schools it doesn’t need more prisons
Give the people some education and there won’t be more victims
I don’t believe in the bible, demons and wizards
Where is god when my people are freezing in blizzards?
It’s so cold with no home they’re fiending for liquor
And you think that you’re better, you see them and snicker
Just cuz you got some cash it doesn’t make you bigger
The only thing your cash does is just make you richer
And all money does is just make you bitter
That’s why you don’t see your kids as much as your babysitter
That’s why celebrities are all depressed and they make me sicker
Cuz starving kids got a smile and their faces glitter
We think they need fresh water and can’t feed themselves
But they appreciate what they got and don’t dream of wealth
That’s why I think you’re all fake and can’t be yourselves
You feel bad for them when you’re the ones who need their help
So I don’t give to charity cuz it don’t mean they poor
When they’re rich with happiness, but we need more
Money is the root of all evil, and I’ve seen the gore
As long as men live, you gonna see some war
Cuz we steal each others land, and we steal shores
And without your TV set you’d get real bored
While I keep my eyes shut cuz my eyes deceive me
And fuck FOX, I don’t believe the lies on TV
God forbid the News ever say what’s new
It’s always the same story, that’s what they’re paid to do
Terrorists and stock markets, rapes and feuds
Why don’t they talk about Iraq and how we take their fuel?
Or how all the hippies did was preach peace and love
But got judged wrong cuz they would take weed and drugs
And so police stopped their protests and beat them up?
Now that’s irony for you, man. I’ve seen enough
Look at the dollar bill America was built by Masons
It was built by Bush, it was built by Satan
It was funded with blood and death for payments
The Illuminati paved it, stayed quiet and paid him
He took the orders; they pulled the strings and played him
In a land where corporations are more powerful then the Nation
I don’t care about material, I hate my wealth
I know I’m better then all of you… that’s why I hate myself
They know I am the truth, they know I am a problem
They know I’m angry enough to come find ‘em and stomp ‘em
Put a fucking gun to their head and just cock it
They know I speak for my people so they trying to solve it
They trying to pry my mind open and stop it
Dissolve it with propaganda and brainwash us
I am like Muhammad; the divine prophet
The all the All Seeing Eye is inside of my socket
They want to nail my hands to a burning cross
You don’t want to hear what I gotta say, TURN ME OFF!


My thirst for revolution was not inspired by hatred for others, but by a love for my people. My people are white people, black people, Latin people, Chinese people... my people are humans. I do not hate the ignorant. I do not hate the sheep being herded in a single direction; I hate the dog that guides them. A third of my people don’t even realise or understand what’s going on in the world; I do not blame these people for the worlds problems. I blame he who has knowledge of the injustices and indignities that our people suffer in the world everyday but pretend like it’s ok, and pretend like they're happy. I blame he who works his whole life for something he doesn’t need while forgetting about what he already has. And most importantly I blame he who complains about the world and its problems, but just sits there and does nothing but talk. Do something. Rise up and raise your fists high, march with me and scream, "We are all equal!" No single man is more powerful then we are as a people. The time for being merciful has come to an end; burn it down, burn it all to the fucking floor. Burn it all to ruins like they did to the cities in Iraq. Slaughter them like the pigs that they are; slaughter them the way innocent black people are slaughtered in Darfur by their own religion, while we sit back and do nothing. March with me, strangle these snakes with their own forked tongues and grasp your freedom in your own palm. Viva la revolution
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Old 10-11-09, 12:24 PM   #26
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Lmao I already am Asian sucker, part of russia is located in asia and that's the part my grandparents are from.

I can't spit true shit? Ok...

I will corrupt you
Worse then the system that’s out there to fuck you
Worse then that first girl who you thought loved you
‘Til she broke your heart, put you down and dumped you
You are not ready; you should not be hearing this
The truth is a scary thing and I know that you fear this shit
Like how the fuck could one plane bring down a tower?
I want to bring down the white house, and bring down the cowards
Who lied about Roswell like it can’t still be serious?
Well then who the fuck do you think built the pyramids?
You’re hopeless and laugh like it’s a load of some trash
But you’re the same person who thinks Moses split an ocean in half
Well if that’s possible then I don’t know what the fuck isn’t
Colours seem different when they’re seen through a prism
The ghetto needs more schools it doesn’t need more prisons
Give the people some education and there won’t be more victims
I don’t believe in the bible, demons and wizards
Where is god when my people are freezing in blizzards?
It’s so cold with no home they’re fiending for liquor
And you think that you’re better, you see them and snicker
Just cuz you got some cash it doesn’t make you bigger
The only thing your cash does is just make you richer
And all money does is just make you bitter
That’s why you don’t see your kids as much as your babysitter
That’s why celebrities are all depressed and they make me sicker
Cuz starving kids got a smile and their faces glitter
We think they need fresh water and can’t feed themselves
But they appreciate what they got and don’t dream of wealth
That’s why I think you’re all fake and can’t be yourselves
You feel bad for them when you’re the ones who need their help
So I don’t give to charity cuz it don’t mean they poor
When they’re rich with happiness, but we need more
Money is the root of all evil, and I’ve seen the gore
As long as men live, you gonna see some war
Cuz we steal each others land, and we steal shores
And without your TV set you’d get real bored
While I keep my eyes shut cuz my eyes deceive me
And fuck FOX, I don’t believe the lies on TV
God forbid the News ever say what’s new
It’s always the same story, that’s what they’re paid to do
Terrorists and stock markets, rapes and feuds
Why don’t they talk about Iraq and how we take their fuel?
Or how all the hippies did was preach peace and love
But got judged wrong cuz they would take weed and drugs
And so police stopped their protests and beat them up?
Now that’s irony for you, man. I’ve seen enough
Look at the dollar bill America was built by Masons
It was built by Bush, it was built by Satan
It was funded with blood and death for payments
The Illuminati paved it, stayed quiet and paid him
He took the orders; they pulled the strings and played him
In a land where corporations are more powerful then the Nation
I don’t care about material, I hate my wealth
I know I’m better then all of you… that’s why I hate myself
They know I am the truth, they know I am a problem
They know I’m angry enough to come find ‘em and stomp ‘em
Put a fucking gun to their head and just cock it
They know I speak for my people so they trying to solve it
They trying to pry my mind open and stop it
Dissolve it with propaganda and brainwash us
I am like Muhammad; the divine prophet
The all the All Seeing Eye is inside of my socket
They want to nail my hands to a burning cross
You don’t want to hear what I gotta say, TURN ME OFF!


My thirst for revolution was not inspired by hatred for others, but by a love for my people. My people are white people, black people, Latin people, Chinese people... my people are humans. I do not hate the ignorant. I do not hate the sheep being herded in a single direction; I hate the dog that guides them. A third of my people don’t even realise or understand what’s going on in the world; I do not blame these people for the worlds problems. I blame he who has knowledge of the injustices and indignities that our people suffer in the world everyday but pretend like it’s ok, and pretend like they're happy. I blame he who works his whole life for something he doesn’t need while forgetting about what he already has. And most importantly I blame he who complains about the world and its problems, but just sits there and does nothing but talk. Do something. Rise up and raise your fists high, march with me and scream, "We are all equal!" No single man is more powerful then we are as a people. The time for being merciful has come to an end; burn it down, burn it all to the fucking floor. Burn it all to ruins like they did to the cities in Iraq. Slaughter them like the pigs that they are; slaughter them the way innocent black people are slaughtered in Darfur by their own religion, while we sit back and do nothing. March with me, strangle these snakes with their own forked tongues and grasp your freedom in your own palm. Viva la revolution


that shit was DOPE! i dont know why u dont drop that to a beat, i'd wanna hear it. could make a few things doper, but that would happen when tryin to flow to the beat u find. thats what i do, write the realist shit i can think of and spit it to a beat usually, only sometimes do i actually write to a beat. but that should be a sick ass song, i'd wanna hop on it if u find a beat for it, i'm good at makin hooks. we have a little bit of differents of opinions, but both should be heard, so we should spit on the same track and join and make a track for both types of people, cuz i'm all about revolution too, who cares if we don't believe in the same exact thing, theres more important things goin on in the world than just religion right now.
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but its the love of money that is the root of all evil, not just money. holla back
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Old 10-11-09, 12:28 PM   #27
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i got a verse, i already wrote that would work well with this concept. i'd write it on here, but its over at my dudes place where i record. talkin about pyrimids and movin blocks wordplay type shit, joinin blocks like the pyrimid when they don't even know how they moved one type shit.
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i'm not tryin to hate, i'm tryin to spit as much trueth as i know. i only hate on bull shit
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Old 10-11-09, 03:39 PM   #28
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i dont know, i'll have to tweak that verse a lot, that's not actually a rap it's a poem. After I wrote it I was like shit, I should record it to a beat. So I tried spitting it to a couple different ones and for the begining it would flow but towards the middle and end it'd go off beat so I need to re-write it make some bars longer or shorter so it can flow better
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yeah, and the longer the verse the harder to keep on beat, but when u just go for it and try recording u end up gettin it to work. it takes a while, but u dont have to have it all in one take. fuck, imma go record right now, i got some verses and been downloadin beats all day. make that shit into a track and i'll wanna spit some real shit on it too.
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Old 10-11-09, 04:01 PM   #30
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i got to plan my one last hoorah for tonight with the boys and girls before I take off
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