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Old 10-23-05, 06:27 PM   #1
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Do you remember that first day
Do you remember not finding the words to say
Do you remember when you came to God
Do you remember proclaiming His love abroad

Do you remember back when everything was goin wrong
Every day just seemed to get worse, it didn’t take long
Bein tossed about forced to move in thousands of directions
Couldn’t rely on anyone, so you said, for your own protection
Life’s troubles were breakin you down and continued to win
Goin against everything and kept allowing yourself to sin
After awhile someone you didn’t know just came up and said
“You know where you’re goin after you’re dead?”
Puzzled, you ask him what he means and he grins and begins to read
Tellin of a God, loving and kind, that gave His life and Who you need
Then a tear came to your eye, overwhelmed you sat there and began to cry
You lifted up your voice to the sky, and proclaimed Christ as Most High

[sing]
Do you remember that first day
Do you remember not finding the words to say
Do you remember when you came to God
Do you remember proclaiming His love abroad

Then I saw you walkin a different life than you once were
But then something happened and if all became a blur
One lil trip and you stumbled off the narrow path
Then fell deeper into sin not knowing how long it would last
Started goin back to the old ways, not caring about anything
Got into some scandals and started to wear a lot of bling
I see you walk by the church with a troubled look on your face
Knowing that you have fallen from God’s loving grace
I walk out to see you and ask where you’ve been
The look on your face told me living a life full of sin
Then a tear came to your eye, overwhelmed you sat there and began to cry
I ask you “Remember that day when you announced Christ as Most High?”

[sing]
Do you remember that first day
Do you remember not finding the words to say
Do you remember when you came to God
Do you remember proclaiming His love abroad

Remember that day as long as you live
Keep it in your heart and love freely give
Show everyone what its like to follow the path of Jesus
And maybe they will come and be with the rest of us

[sing]
Do you remember that first day
Do you remember not finding the words to say
Do you remember when you came to God
Do you remember proclaiming His love abroad







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Old 10-23-05, 11:59 PM   #2
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very good piece, true, and a good read...keep it up 9/10
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Old 10-24-05, 10:50 PM   #3
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thanks for the feed, uppin this..............




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Old 10-24-05, 11:07 PM   #4
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this was actually well put together but it was way too simplistic and basic,the storyline was mad played,not much of a strong vocabulary,the only thing i can really say that was good was the emotion you had strong emotion....anyways decent iguess 4/10
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