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Old 01-12-04, 04:33 AM   #1
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Tha ONe 4 Me

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This is to you baby,

Baby you are the one and only,console me,
ill be there when you need me, all i want you to do,
is feed me with your love,so i can fly off like a dove,
in the air,so my life can finaly be fair,
your the only one for me,and im glad im the one you picked to be,
be your man for ever, your clever
good pick baby,your always mai lady,

It might be hard on you,with all this long distance,
but its ok baby,il be there,trust me ill come,
we will be together forever,i promise,
8 hours away,might seem far away,
ill come one mile at a time,it might be a while,
but ill be there then we will be together,
if not now by then i will write you a love letter,

When your sad,bored,or just cold,
give me a call,ill warm you up,
I'll always talk to you,when you need me,
you know what number to dial to reach me,
this is the first time i felt love,
and im glad its with you,cause your my one and only,
this will last ,and it wont be fast,but ill be there,
when we meet our lips will touch,
it will be soft and too much,

together for ever once again,
i just wanna tell you more,
but the more i say i feel pain,
and it hurts soo bad i think my heart is sore,
but i will take the pain,
once we see each other,
our love will rain,

so baby i hope you understand i really do love you
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Old 01-12-04, 02:46 PM   #2
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Aww this is really sweet. I liked all of the emotion that you put into it. Not too many guys can express their feelins like that for a girl, n i must say, u did an amazing job of doing it. I hope everything works out and that you two will be together cause this was great. Keep it up.
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Old 01-12-04, 02:55 PM   #3
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nice job man, some nice emotion you put into this, hope she feels the same bout you dawg, keep it up
peace
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