Voted For: Apostrophe

I've Got To Say Apo Took This One.

Myst's Bars Were ENTIIIIIRELY Played Out,
And The Majority Of His Personals Were Fake.

Dissing Apo's Shit With Women And Such,
Eh... It Doesnt Have Much Effect For Me.
Especially Since No One Knows Eachother So You Clearly Wouldnt Know.

Myst's Best Line Was:

'Lack of brains,you cant think of 4s so your mettas paused*
N you aint got no flow man like you have mettapause'

I Mean, That Was The Most Original,
And Legitamite Punch That He Threw At Apo.
If You Spit Like That The Whole Time You Would Have Won.

Apo...
You're Punches Were Much More Original,
And Throughout You Stayed Much More Consistant.

While Myst Had A 'High Point',
You Had Rather, A Single 'Low Point'.

'I spit hard on your verse… Leaving this battle damp….
&& no one would have fun watching your words play even if..
…………………………..you were the scrabble champ…'

Kind Of A Poor Opener In My Eyes.
The Punch Just Fell Short Of The Rest Of The Verse.
And It Also Lacked The Creativity Of The Other Lines.

'I Predict A KO’ the whole way.. I’ll be Routing this Fool…
Cause The Odd’s Are Against You.. Like Counting By Two’s…'

I Dont Even Know Why But That Was My Favorite Line.
It's Simplicity Yet Impact Was Just Real Nice In My Eyes.

So Ya, Overall Apo Took This Easy.

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ewpost&t=209572

^Apos...you think u could RTF plz?^

Voted For: Apostrophe

Apostrophe:

I spit hard on your verse… Leaving this battle damp….
&& no one would have fun watching your words play even if..
…………………………..you were the scrabble champ…

Lol Ouch...Good personal and punch...Really nice

I Predict A KO’ the whole way.. I’ll be Routing this Fool…
Cause The Odd’s Are Against You.. Like Counting By Two’s…

Lmfao good shit...

From Detroit, Piston Fan? Kid give me a reason..
You wont rebound from this loss.. Like Ben Wallace..
……………………………………….last season..

good shit

Yeah you can write a verse but G you cant kill with it..
While I Lodge mine soo far down your throat…
…………………………………..........S kiers will Chill in it…

Fucking owned...

Overall: Your verse was sexy man. So dope, I had to touch myself. Nothing played, you had some hard-hitting punches, creative concepts, and dope personals. This verse will be hard to top.




Mystic:

You wanna be a net thug with rhymes cheesier than cheddar
The only Hood that you reppin is on the back of your sweater

Played as fuck.

Lack of brains,you cant think of 4s so your mettas paused*
N you aint got no flow man like you have mettapause

Hot concept, but worded horribly...Would've been dope though

You wasn't never meant to be born. I swear it was accident
You talkin mean game for being a veteran in abstinance

Meh...Decent...But again, you need to work on wording

Dawg you aint get girls, ill end it...yo this shits feneto
Girls c between ya legs, think you got bit by a mosquito

Lol this made me laugh...Pretty good

Overall: You had some played concepts, some wack lines, and some horrible wording in this verse man. Stay away from the played shit, and word your shit better man, because your verse DID have potential. You just didnt give him all you had, and he's not someone who will let you get by that easily.

V/ Apostrophe

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