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Old 10-30-05, 02:58 PM   #1
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okay.. soooo this is my first time ever seriously getting in to audio. i recorded this relatively quickly.. Black Magik fixed my quality up the best he could...

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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2516725
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=213085

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Old 10-30-05, 02:59 PM   #2
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yeah you know what i think about this track...umm just work on the emotion and flow. and its CRACK. your lyrics are good and nice multi's and good quality
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Old 10-30-05, 03:36 PM   #3
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I'd have to agree with kontro, Your flow is a lil choppy and as well as your delievery, delivery aint to bad but it seems like your flow messes that up. emotion needs to be upped some more as well, though it wasn't bad. nice voice once you get that emotion goin you'll sound dope. lyrics were good as well.

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Old 10-30-05, 03:46 PM   #4
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Old 10-31-05, 06:43 PM   #5
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Old 10-31-05, 07:26 PM   #6
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ok.......

LOL @ how much your voice has changed....black did good with the quality.....

hmm....work on pronouncing your words more clearly....

damn u even got better since the time u recorded this last time.....flows gotten better...still a lil bit choppy but not bad......
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