i responded to like 4 of CHokahnmiwangs tracks the other day..and eckos track



yea...this is a song i did with a kid that records at my house....he's only been rappin for like a month or so.....so he def. has mad potential....PLEASE give him constructive criticism..and tell him thing he needs to work on....as well as myself...

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Banks - Tension Is Felt ft. Ike

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fucking banks sucks dick and he needs to die.. rofl nah jp.. he's coo im feeling his voice.. but he definately needs alot of work lyrically.. and his flow is still a bit shaky.. needs to work on syllable counts and such.. but i have no room to talk.. he does have a lot of potential.. and i can see him being a nice audio head.. but for now he has a lot of work to do lyrically and flow wise. but his voice and overall pressence is cool.. and ike ur verse just sucked.. u need to get a life

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My Lines Are ILL yo

DAMN not bad for only rappin for just a month...ur flow was on for the most point fell off a lil in some spots but not too bad..ur delivery was ok not the worst, but not the best and the emotion was there but need ta work on it not like im one ta speak my emtion needs help too....ike not the best i seen from you but not bad...could tell this one isnt in ur fathers studios work lol but it still dope quality...yo defitnly not bad...8/10 defitlny not bad for starters how is that fuckin possible u just been spittin in a month!!??...yo why the fuck cant i start out that good...lol anways keep this shit up

yo thank u guys for this " crostuctive critisism" ima def work on wat i need to i got one more song i workin on and well gettin up for yall to dump on but yea def lovin the feedback guys thanx for honesty and i know exactly were i feel off
the got damn part ::"with ryhmes like yalls no wander your music is free":: sry for that but thank u guys for the help

uppppppppppppppppppp

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-listening

wow kid gots some lyriks flow is kool,on point the quality is a def. + his delivery was pretty good.the beat is definetaly catchy.

flow is nice IKE lyriks is pretty good being on beat is on point,delivery is nice emotion is nice also man u got this one homie
this is a dope drop famz RV needs tracks like theze famz feel me!

(this is a RTF)good loox famz i like!

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beat is ehhh....lyrics is decent...hook is ok...2nd dude....lyrics is hot...flow is pimp..cocrin line is nice...
decent drop..not realy feelin banks....and hope he is gona change his AKA..fr obvious reasons

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HELLLZ YEEAHH !!!!

Like The Beat

Hooks nice,Koo Liyrics,Deliverys Nice

Banks-
Flow A lil Rushed

Falls off Once I Hear

Delivery Is Nice

Emotions Aight...Could Be Upped A Lil


Lyrics Are Koo


Aight....Hook Again

Ike...

Deliverys Dope


Lyrics Are Koo

Emotions Nice

Presence Is DOPE

Wooooo!!!!!!!

Love Your Verse


Aight Banks You Got Mad Potential You Jus need To Find It

Overall:8/10

Plz Rtf On My "The Lost Tapes"
Link:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216494

Thx

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OYD MAFIA

thanks....uppin........

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Listening...

Not feelin the beat...

Hook is cool...

Banks...delivery is decent actually...flow is choppy, but actually decent. Lyrics are cool. Voice is coo...definetely has potential.

Ike...Quality sounds muffled a bit...good flow, good lyrics...great delivery.

Good shit. Keep it up.

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