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5 | 83.33% |
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07-10-05, 03:49 PM
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Poet's Daughter.
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal:  ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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07-10-05, 11:35 PM
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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07-11-05, 11:56 PM
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in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
but its funny how this wasn't upped for more than a day, but for some reason you go and pick out my battle
i guess people just dont appreciate orgininality these days =/
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07-12-05, 02:30 PM
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IP: 6658 1D4F
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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07-13-05, 07:09 AM
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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07-13-05, 11:12 PM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: 1184 3B5F
Voted For: artÃ-stica~Mente
This was a hard one to vote on.. Both of you stretch your lines like theres no tomorrow ---------________--------- Stretched lines makes these things REAL long and tedious to read.. But to be honest, I was feeling tweetys verse more. I understood where she was comming from and the story painted a more clear image than what I could pick up on when I was reading daub's verse.. I can’t believe I was hypnotized by you, and tightly bound in your spell till December ^That was a nicly put together line.. Only things you needa work on with topicals is to try and make them into more of a rap song, use more multis, dont stretch lines and remember to only write stuff you would spit on a track. Best way to do this, is just by playing a beat and writing to it as if your writing a song. Daubs your shit was good, it was just at times I didnt know where you were going with it, I realise you were talking about a fling with some chick, but you would of benefitted from using clearer references, like actually telling the story mixed in with the emotions you were trying to express. Wasnt a bad topical though and you beat tweety on rhyming technique only slightly. But the overall vote has to go to tweety.. Just dont write as stretched lines next battle rofl  |
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07-13-05, 11:28 PM
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IP: ADBD 16C4
.................Lol @ Daubs............................It's drakel you fool. Lol Uppin
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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07-13-05, 11:32 PM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: 1184 3B5F
Yeah my bad, just woke up.. I'm braindead for names
soz drakel.. |
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07-13-05, 11:39 PM
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
hmm, didn't think my lines were too stretched....cause it all flowed.......but word
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07-14-05, 08:38 AM
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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07-14-05, 11:05 AM
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IP: 0D11 88C9
Voted For: artÃ-stica~Mente
wow nice topicals from the both of u both did good imagery was both had the imagery and the vocab the words were very emotional as well both brung that i yall verses yo u both did good but really at the end is so much as a tie but i do have to pick a winner so.....tweety.....u had alot of imagery and just a good amount of that made u win this toipical dont get me wrong drakel did good but didnt have that many as tweety and also......tweety u had also the emotion build there just work a little more on vocab ok......thats all and drakel just work a lil more on ur emotions.....ok but u did do good on vocab....... so keep it up u both....... v/ tweety aka artistica mente........
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