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06-29-04, 03:03 AM
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A Reflection Of The Past
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Trail Of Death
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trail of death some poeople say you have to die someday.. and others wonder how they'll die one day.. do we go to heavin or what lies beyond death.. some care a great amount,lots of people care less.. we will never know till you take the trail.. most likely after you die you may not return to tell.. i find life to be played as if its all a game.. some people find life a gift,others see it as being lame.. is your spirit's future soon to be eternal..? thats one question you may need to ask your self in a diary or journal.. because human kind may not know,nor ever find out.. some spend life thinkin,others just live life till times out.. some may wonder if god created us ,then who created god..? not sure and can not ever be sure till death arrives.. winding down to death wondering what comes after?,your heart thrives.. thinkin to yourself why does it happen to me..? its not just you its billions and billions of other lives.. the trail of death which is present and future,will remain simply a mystery.. thinkin you are the only person that thinks about death,check ur history.. million's have felt the heartache and insanity but found to live with it.. its like a game you playit then quitit,you live then die. so all you can do is walk the trail of death and wonder why..?
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06-29-04, 03:22 AM
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...i'm da nicest...
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this was a straight drop...beginnin was stronger..n the closing line...in the middle it fell off a bit..but overall nice drop.....holla
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06-29-04, 05:25 AM
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Odi et Amo
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Real nice drop, described how i feel sometimes, vocab matched subject perfectly
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06-30-04, 01:38 AM
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Yo I'm feelin your poem playa.That some pretty deep stuff people be thinkin bout mad props.
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06-30-04, 02:23 AM
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thanx maybe ill get an rb award....lol
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06-30-04, 08:16 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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yeah that was real, and honest man, death is somewhat a touchy subject, but we all gotta face that shit, props for speakin your mind......keep playin the game
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06-30-04, 08:29 PM
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Jumpin' Along
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damn that was a really nice drop i was really feeling the emotion's and the feeling going toward the piece...nice drop and props
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06-30-04, 09:50 PM
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thanx yall
uppin
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06-30-04, 10:08 PM
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New to RB
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i agree, nice drop, not somethin wrote about alot
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07-01-04, 12:04 AM
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A Reflection Of The Past
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thanx uppin
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07-01-04, 03:24 AM
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The Ups and Downs of Life
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pretty decent... felt the end the most, keep it up. ez.
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07-04-04, 06:39 PM
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A Reflection Of The Past
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uppin
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07-07-04, 01:14 PM
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A Reflection Of The Past
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uppin for more feedback
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07-09-04, 03:37 AM
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Blow Me
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yo nice drop... im not a real "poem" guy but hey ur good at it.. u dropped what u thought... and it was real good......
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07-13-04, 05:19 AM
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A Reflection Of The Past
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Upiin
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