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Old 08-27-05, 10:13 PM   #1
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The Resolution - *Diss To The Movement*

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Yo This Is Resolution

These Bastards Have Been After The trigga Town Title For a While
Now They Look In amazement As We ReFokus Their Style
And Prevokingly Mild is how they lyrics Be, See Meet This Master Gat
I Already Killed A Naturaul Killa So We All Know that THassarap
LFSness Is A Wreck In The Makin Mad Bcuz Im more Than Tha Capital
Im Puttin Verbs in Their contenent As Part Of This Act-in-Stall
Reflekt Been Fuckin Brandon Into X-Tortion Till His asshole Whistles
Pass Those Missles and Watch Me Blast The Mystiqal Mistyque Bowl
I Done Merked Their Leader So Their in Much Payne Since I Spit
Carlos Been Beggin The Black G'z For Some Lines Like Nigga Please
And You Know Its all Over After I Walked In And Saw Sabotage On His Knees!

Simple Yet I Dont Do OM'z But Yall So Fun To diss
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Old 08-27-05, 10:15 PM   #2
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206217

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We Uppin Up in Here I Knopw Its small

But Small Work For Small Problemz!!!
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Old 08-27-05, 10:27 PM   #3
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LoL fam can you say owned?
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Old 08-27-05, 11:05 PM   #4
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No that wasn't owned. Now that was a pretty good diss. I like how you used everyones names in it. The only line I thought was really good was the Thassarap line. Flow was also good. I was hoping it woulda been a bit longer. I would give it a 6/10.
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Old 08-27-05, 11:22 PM   #5
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diz was sum shit in my opinion 1st off if u gonna diss spell my name right
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Old 08-27-05, 11:36 PM   #6
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LoL fam can you say owned?



Far from Ownage my man.

Ok.For starters...it was weak.I saw what you were trying to do.But you wasn't dissing.U were more of self glorifing yourself throughout the whole thing.Let me break down for you.

These Bastards Have Been After The trigga Town Title For a While
Now They Look In amazement As We ReFokus Their Style
^^not dissin..u sayin u gonna refokus their style..not a diss
And Prevokingly Mild is how they lyrics Be, See Meet This Master Gat
I Already Killed A Naturaul Killa So We All Know that THassarap
^^not dissin...ok...so u beat one their member...so what?
LFSness Is A Wreck In The Makin Mad Bcuz Im more Than Tha Capital
Im Puttin Verbs in Their contenent As Part Of This Act-in-Stall
^^not dissin.....u talkin about wat u gonna do...
Reflekt Been Fuckin Brandon Into X-Tortion Till His asshole Whistles
Pass Those Missles and Watch Me Blast The Mystiqal Mistyque Bowl
^^1st line was a first...the 2nd was gangsta talk..u firin missiles...no..
I Done Merked Their Leader So Their in Much Payne Since I Spit
Carlos Been Beggin The Black G'z For Some Lines Like Nigga Please
^^a lil dissin here
And You Know Its all Over After I Walked In And Saw Sabotage On His Knees
^^ok..but still weak

Now I know your'e gonna say "ooh..it's an OM..not a battle".Yes..I understand that.Om disses are weaker than battling.But still..you can't go self-glorifing.But the title states it's a diss to the movement.So next time you should diss.Just
cause you mention there names in a line doesn't make it a diss.

Overall...I wasn't feeling it.And don't go coming at me with hate now just for it.I am simply stating my personal opinon on it.
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Old 08-27-05, 11:37 PM   #7
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ayyo this wasnt half bad, alright diss ill give you that....my line was tight lol...cuz it had my name in it of course!.....umm...but i honestly dont feel ur punches was as hard as they could be.......i also think the thassarap is the best line.......but i dont approve the dissing...........even though we did it first.
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Old 08-28-05, 12:08 AM   #8
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yp....and my diss was wack.....yeah thename thing was cool when i did on the Raw diss wow



comon man u can do better than that.....my diss beat this by a long shot
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Old 08-28-05, 12:35 AM   #9
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Far from Ownage my man.

Ok.For starters...it was weak.I saw what you were trying to do.But you wasn't dissing.U were more of self glorifing yourself throughout the whole thing.Let me break down for you.

These Bastards Have Been After The trigga Town Title For a While
Now They Look In amazement As We ReFokus Their Style
^^not dissin..u sayin u gonna refokus their style..not a diss
And Prevokingly Mild is how they lyrics Be, See Meet This Master Gat
I Already Killed A Naturaul Killa So We All Know that THassarap
^^not dissin...ok...so u beat one their member...so what?
LFSness Is A Wreck In The Makin Mad Bcuz Im more Than Tha Capital
Im Puttin Verbs in Their contenent As Part Of This Act-in-Stall
^^not dissin.....u talkin about wat u gonna do...
Reflekt Been Fuckin Brandon Into X-Tortion Till His asshole Whistles
Pass Those Missles and Watch Me Blast The Mystiqal Mistyque Bowl
^^1st line was a first...the 2nd was gangsta talk..u firin missiles...no..
I Done Merked Their Leader So Their in Much Payne Since I Spit
Carlos Been Beggin The Black G'z For Some Lines Like Nigga Please
^^a lil dissin here
And You Know Its all Over After I Walked In And Saw Sabotage On His Knees
^^ok..but still weak

Now I know your'e gonna say "ooh..it's an OM..not a battle".Yes..I understand that.Om disses are weaker than battling.But still..you can't go self-glorifing.But the title states it's a diss to the movement.So next time you should diss.Just
cause you mention there names in a line doesn't make it a diss.

Overall...I wasn't feeling it.And don't go coming at me with hate now just for it.I am simply stating my personal opinon on it.


^LoL first off herb if you knew anything you would know that he keyed this and Stanza would merk anybody if he battled at the front lines or wrote so speak what you know!
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Old 08-28-05, 12:42 AM   #10
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^LoL first off herb if you knew anything you would know that he keyed this and Stanza would merk anybody if he battled at the front lines or wrote so speak what you know!



so because he keyed it...I must give him a free pass for droppin whack?And yo..I leave honest feedback..that can help him improve if he isn't ignorant..and now I'm gettin hate?And as for that thing about him able to beat anyone...son..there is no such thing as a "best rapper".There is always someone better than you.No matter what.And you call me a herb?Hmm.Who's more of a herb?Someone who just says "yo..ownage dawg!"..or someone who takes the time to break the verse down and leave decent feedback?And besides..how was I sopposed to know he keyed it when there is nothing that says he did?And like I said..if he did..it wouldn't matter..keying verse is no excuse for it.If he was smart..he would take the feedback to help him improve as opposed to starting a grudge against me.Put your elevation goals in front of your "net ego".So leave me alone.
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Old 08-28-05, 01:02 AM   #11
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Elevation he don't need none this was a 5min key homie know the facts bro
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Old 08-28-05, 01:06 AM   #12
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Elevation he don't need none this was a 5min key homie know the facts bro



he dropped sub-par in my opinion.PERIOD.I don't care if he keyed it or not.and there is no emcee who doesn't need elevation.That's like sayin someone in this world is perfect.There is no such thing.
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Old 08-28-05, 01:08 AM   #13
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Trust me read one of Stanza's battles and you'll see he doesn't need elevation but I'm done talkin to you ~out~
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Old 08-28-05, 01:08 AM   #14
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Trust me read one of Stanza's battles and you'll see he doesn't need elevation but I'm done talkin to you ~out~



I did read his battle with Focus..good..yes..but the "best"?..NO.And i'm done as well.one.
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Old 08-28-05, 02:10 AM   #15
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wow, ok you need to extended a diss longer then 10 lines lmfao, your flow is weak, metaphors i didnt see any not even any smiles rarely, obviously you dont know how to do text but bold peoples nicknames in your wack diss, learn how to do text before you go and do some shit

P.S Trigga Town is wack.
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