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Old 07-16-06, 02:38 PM   #1
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rapverses illest f/sick.

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Mystic Chaos
Sick.



im bringing it to you complex
breakin necks
takin checks
wagin bets
killin cajin chefs
just to be the one with the best rep
i get the best check
better yet
im surprised there aint any charges pressed yet



yo the names sick dont let it fool ya
cuz ill fuckin tool ya
give you a book and ill school ya
i were the crown cuz i rule ya
with a iron fist im the king
bitch kiss my ring
lemme do my thing
fo sho, dis the song i sing



who you think you is to depict shit
u actin like a fortune tella bitch
you aint predict this
get tha facts off ya dome
leave it alone
get tha cold steal to ya brains boom! no bodies home
condone ya life yet condone ya futua
turn ya back to quick look i aint afraid ta shoot ya
im nice with the words but speak louda wit the 4/5th
with a full clip
ill snag ya bitch and make my own chips
dont be playa hatin
cuz the facts that im statin
are debatin
should i end your life or let ya head be achin



bloods and crips run and hide
when i come by in my low ride
strapped with a gloc 9 on both sides
just in case the they got four-fives
i light em like a roman candle
if they cant handle... the style i spit
and the flow i bring to the game
recognize my name
S-I-C-K, its so sick im ill
ready to kill just for the thrills




be a man step up come on wat ya got?
tryna be a thug eva since pac got shot
well im in ya face now so u a thug or not
talkin all this shit now lets see u back it up
cuz im done talkin lets fight or pack it up
all your boys aint laughin now so ima laugh it up
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Old 07-16-06, 02:40 PM   #2
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links to come lol
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Old 07-16-06, 02:50 PM   #3
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Old 07-16-06, 03:11 PM   #4
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yo, we tha dopest.
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Old 07-16-06, 06:18 PM   #5
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This Shit Was Pretty Hot, Both Yall Verses Was Straight... Can't Really Give No Critism It Was Decent. Keep Droppin...
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Old 07-16-06, 07:24 PM   #6
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This Was All Right At Most But Where's The Vocab You Are Fragment Rapping A Few Multi's But Why Are You Rhyming The Same Words Get Some Vocab, Bu Tkeep Coming With It You Can Improve And Also A Lot Of This Is Played The Fuck Out
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Old 07-16-06, 08:14 PM   #7
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shut the fuck up.
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Old 07-17-06, 10:58 AM   #8
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Mystic Chaos need feed critique my verse homey please
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Old 07-17-06, 01:39 PM   #9
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no doubt, and if u didnt catch on...me and sick. were obviously fucking around.
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Old 07-18-06, 02:47 AM   #10
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This was aight, flow was good and multies were there, just up the imagery and vocab and it's all good..Stay up
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Old 07-18-06, 11:35 PM   #11
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okay

i see that you guys have a solid grasp of imagery, your verses are constructed visually appealing, and you know how to excite the readers.

i think that your only problem here could have been that not much was said.

you call this a flex, but where are the relevent punches?

where are the "big up to me, i 'm nice" lines?

find those and repost.

i liked it, but so much more could be said.
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Old 07-19-06, 12:25 AM   #12
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*** Real good piece...I enjoyed reading it...keep it up 9/10 ***
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Old 07-19-06, 10:27 PM   #13
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ummm simply silly

do not take this as a real drop we made a mockery of all the herbs who would come in here just to get posts and say it was dope...wen we made it suck on purpose......
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Old 07-20-06, 01:00 AM   #14
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that should NEVER be your priority here.

do your best or don't at all.
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Old 07-20-06, 02:57 PM   #15
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the verse was ok but it didnt make much sense and it sounded like a white rapper cause all you did was put rhymes together
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