Battle Rules:

6 Line Minimum
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-06-07 at 03:48 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Fly-E has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-07 03:48 PM.

Hid Behind WARTANK During That LK CLASHIN,This Time Make Sure Ya Shoes Got Sum fuckin TRACTION,Kuz Like Robes In Boxing He Always Taken Off Before The ACTION!!..(fatal Attraction'll)Tear Off Ya ROOF,REALLY!Im Santa Clause Wit A Bag A Bombs & A KOO MILLI,*Squeeze* & Make u DISSAPEAR Wit PROOF SILLY!After I Stuff Ya Wit That Citys Cheese Steak & Make Ya *POOF*-ILLY(POO PHILLY)!!//Im The Troof Illy,Every Word'll Damage YUR BARS!Dark & Ikky Like Im Covered In TAR You Get Smothered & Scarred!Wont Be Able To WALK WIT THE LOSS When I BRAKE YOUR FOOT ON THE GROUND Like Stopping In A Flinstone CAR!!..(flip those bars) Yea U Aiight But Im A BIT TIGHTER!I SPIT FIRE & U Wouldnt Get A Thumbs UP Driven By HITCH HIKERS!Im Shake Spear Wit Aids Ikky A SICK WRITER!I LAY-TEXT Like Condoms But When The CLIP FIRE,I'll Leave U On The Floor Like TRIP WIRE!!..(illy Screamen & Shouten Ta God Like A Shit Choir) I Make It RAIN BRO!Pop Sumthin & Leave ya SAME HOLES Where Ya BRAIN GOES!Murder Ya Family How The THANG BLOWS,Scatter Ya Kin Everywhere Kuz I'll Leave Ya FAMILY FEW'D(Feud) Like GAME SHOWS!!..Every Lame Knows Ur Like Solitare Just Playin YA SELF!The Tre In The BELT,Bulllets Touch Ya When Im BLAZEN YA FELT!Illy Stapped?Nigga Ya Burners Like Trophees Kuz They STAY ON THE SHELF!!(aimen Wit Stealth) U Just FIRE BLANKS!(illimit)Armd Wit A WIRED SHANK,But What For Kuz U Wont Fight U Choose The RUN-WAY Like TYRA BANKS!He Like Playn Hide & Seek Wit Soldiers Kuz He Always Duck Behind Or ADMIRE-TANK(wartank)!Ikky A Higher Rank Just DISPATCHEN BLOWS!So Shut Up & Listen For I Plant U Under Death Like A CASKET ROSE!& This Bastid Knows ill Put a Bounty on His Head like Balancin NAPKIN ROLLS!!!(bounty napkins)..good luck

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chip has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-07 04:01 PM.

No beef i hear u was shippin out!
Good luck chip and good luck when u leave to homie!

i'll dumb it down a little to make it more fair...

pick a new site or profession, you don't get it
i already know your verse is weak, and i ain't even read it
i'm by no means a psychic, or some false prophet
you whack, so is your alias, it's common knowledge
said i wouldn't last a minute in your hood, you can pipe it
ain't even man enough to talk some shit, you gotta type it

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
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my poetry:
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damn, you should've put a max line too, if i knew u were doing all that, i wouldn't have done just 6...

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

my poetry:
untitled

OO yah mybad homie w/e happens if u want when u get bak w/e u get bak lmao we can do it again! I thought u saw the rules mybad!

Voted For: Fly-E

uhh.. does it need explanation?? FLY-E all da way!!

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Thanx for the feed! Uppin for more votes! Lets make this quick!

Uppin for more Votes!!!! Pleeze Vote i will go chek ur battles out!

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The B.E.S.T Crew
Were Back!

Voted For: chip

Hid Behind WARTANK During That LK CLASHIN,This Time Make Sure Ya Shoes Got Sum fuckin TRACTION,Kuz Like Robes In Boxing He Always Taken Off Before The ACTION!!..(fatal Attraction'll)Tear Off Ya ROOF,REALLY!Im Santa Clause Wit A Bag A Bombs & A KOO MILLI,*Squeeze* & Make u DISSAPEAR Wit PROOF SILLY!After I Stuff Ya Wit That Citys Cheese Steak & Make Ya *POOF*-ILLY(POO PHILLY)!!//Im The Troof Illy,Every Word'll Damage YUR BARS!Dark & Ikky Like Im Covered In TAR You Get Smothered & Scarred!Wont Be Able To WALK WIT THE LOSS When I BRAKE YOUR FOOT ON THE GROUND Like Stopping In A Flinstone CAR!!..(flip those bars) Yea U Aiight But Im A BIT TIGHTER!I SPIT FIRE & U Wouldnt Get A Thumbs UP Driven By HITCH HIKERS!Im Shake Spear Wit Aids Ikky A SICK WRITER!I LAY-TEXT Like Condoms But When The CLIP FIRE,I'll Leave U On The Floor Like TRIP WIRE!!..(illy Screamen & Shouten Ta God Like A Shit Choir) I Make It RAIN BRO!Pop Sumthin & Leave ya SAME HOLES Where Ya BRAIN GOES!Murder Ya Family How The THANG BLOWS,Scatter Ya Kin Everywhere Kuz I'll Leave Ya FAMILY FEW'D(Feud) Like GAME SHOWS!!..Every Lame Knows Ur Like Solitare Just Playin YA SELF!The Tre In The BELT,Bulllets Touch Ya When Im BLAZEN YA FELT!Illy Stapped?Nigga Ya Burners Like Trophees Kuz They STAY ON THE SHELF!!(aimen Wit Stealth) U Just FIRE BLANKS!(illimit)Armd Wit A WIRED SHANK,But What For Kuz U Wont Fight U Choose The RUN-WAY Like TYRA BANKS!He Like Playn Hide & Seek Wit Soldiers Kuz He Always Duck Behind Or ADMIRE-TANK(wartank)!Ikky A Higher Rank Just DISPATCHEN BLOWS!So Shut Up & Listen For I Plant U Under Death Like A CASKET ROSE!& This Bastid Knows ill Put a Bounty on His Head like Balancin NAPKIN ROLLS!!!(bounty napkins)..good luck

^^your whole verse refered to yaself as some1 else...whats the deal?.. i dont in any way believe you wrote this, your structure was that of a some1 who copy/pasted the entire thing...so what you bit, man up n just elevate yaself, its much more rewarding that way...........
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chip, elevate, you get my vote for the simple fact it wasnt bitin...
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dont in any way hold resentment for this vote, just remedy the problem.
daz.
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vote chip

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

i feel u, but like i said, i dumbed down, i've seen him write and this isn't even his style... i would've came harder, but i know this guy, so i just keystyled...

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

my poetry:
untitled

Voted For: chip

I Vote For Chip, Sorry Fly, But His Had Nice Structure And God Flow, It Was Difficult To UnderStand Yours
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