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Old 08-22-09, 06:59 PM   #31
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Thanks uppin this please lets get the 3rd vote for the knock out.
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Old 08-22-09, 07:09 PM   #32
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Old 08-25-09, 03:09 AM   #33
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Last battle on here lets get it closed uppin this explain the votes please.. thanks.
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Old 08-28-09, 12:23 AM   #34
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Uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn one more vote and its ko lets get this shit closed.
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Old 09-10-09, 06:14 PM   #35
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both terrible... i see why battles take so long to get votes, cuz they aren't worth reading
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Old 09-11-09, 12:27 AM   #36
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lmao why'll ur 32-23 so you have won wat percent of your battles? lol.. And u actually care about the site it would be different if you didnt take the time outta ur busy life to do 55 battles dumb ass. I guarntee you if i tried i would own you in a battle get some dawg.
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Old 09-25-09, 02:39 AM   #37
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Voted For: Technique

againnn my vote goes to fly e...flow tight
vocab iight
just came at em harder

other dooode i dno wat ur thinkin squishy peach? that ended it for me ahaaa

my vote goes to fly e
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Old 09-30-09, 12:46 AM   #38
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Fly E
You Came Pretty Hard A Little Personals In There Structure Was A Little Of Some Of Your Lines Sound A Little Stretched But Hey You Had A Few Good Disses In Here One Of My Favorites Was

reloadin this keyboard clip cus u dont seem to understand technique
Ur shits as sweet as a nectourine take out the seeds its a squishy peach

Came Good On That One Not Alot Of Multi's Here That Nicholas Cage Line Was Pretty Good..Overall I Say You Took This

Alright
Tech
You Came With Some Good Multi's Here But Some Basic Shit..The Worst Line Was

tech leaves ya brain rattled, so u flee, bitch skedaddle
ur losin ya mind like scrabble, talk babble

You Forced It To Much Didn't Sound As Good As It Could Of Bin
One Of The Lines I Liked Was

i got a fuckin idea, i'll shut ya mouth choke you with an apple
u couldnt flow deadly if you were poisoness vennom

Somewhat Original But You Could Of Made It Sound Alot Better Bro

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Personals-Fly
Multi's-Tech
Original-Fly
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Old 10-03-09, 08:20 AM   #39
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you weren't as bad as the other dude so im voting for you
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Old 11-05-09, 11:51 AM   #40
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upppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnn
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Old 11-05-09, 11:55 PM   #41
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Right sick of ya sight fly E so please leave polightly.
seen ya wack battles b4 and you cannot flow tightly

ehhh... ok i guess... nothing hard hitting

fuckin bitch ass,i'll clip you for just trying to battle
tech leaves ya brain rattled, so u flee, bitch skedaddle

hmmmm... not really feeling it... small attempt at multi's but still not going hard yet

ur losin ya mind like scrabble, talk babble
i got a fuckin idea, i'll shut ya mouth choke you with an apple

no... garbage line... adding profanity doesn't make this line sound any tougher

u couldnt flow deadly if you were poisoness vennom
i rock punchlines i send em, leave u knocked deadn'd

no again... wack line

haha ur a fake gangsta, u see me and u run bitch
haha cuz i got more power den u have murked u for fun bitch

filler...weak as hell... the haha stuff is unnecessary..lines are too simple... no punch... no complexity

ya words are your ammo and guess wot i left you without
Fly E wot dat stand for feathers tech, punched ya mouth

terrible... words can't really describe it

from north east, west to south.. hammer ur fuckin soul in
u couldnt fuck a bitch man ur blind u dont know where da hole in

for one... this shit doesn't even make sense AND is pretty wack .. what's the relationship between Fly-E and feathers?... i don't get it

soz ya life been stolen by me, u think u can murk, but u lost ya nerve
so admit it ur the king of herbs, and i smash ya verbs with a deadly curse.

weak closer... no punches throughout ... lines don't connect... not thought out very well... very randomly put together

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Unbann me unbann me i promise to stop ravin and ranting
Give me another chance please amu my skill are done panting

not comprehending this line at all... who is amu "my skill are done panting"?... da fuck does THAT mean?!!!

This mutha fucka has spent so much time postin shit
Attemptin to type skits bitch get off shady records dick when ya spit

stretched as hell for one... forced multis... no punch

reloadin this keyboard clip cus u dont seem to understand technique
Ur shits as sweet as a nectourine take out the seeds its a squishy peach

one of your better lines so far but still kinda weak...still no punch

You are out of reach suckin on eryones shit like a leach
until i squeeze my skin and make u combust Fly-E's blood when i bleed

I have no idea of what the hell you are talking about here... you squeeze your own skin and then make tech combust YOUR blood when YOU bleed? ... wow... when you figure that shyt out clue the rest of us in on it

I think latinkittens right u is one disturbed individual
That ends now cus when ur 6 feet in the dirt you'll be invisible

garbage line... LK is not a part of this battle... again... no punch

No one will have to buy into ur pitty pussy rhymes
rhymin you with boob than dude...ya i know rapverse its about that time

stretched... not worded together well... no punch, yet again

To crush his lines and show him who is really true
Even nicolas cage would say he could fuckin rap better than u

nicolas cage?... really?... I give this one an "E" for ef... which is phonetic for "F" and not short for effort ... which is aka "Fail"

So heres a lesson techniique you should have jus remained banned
That way we dont have to hear the sappy shit of a fat and lonely grown man

your best line coouldn't come at a better time.... the closer.. still a little stretched but it had a lil bit of a punch... not much... but it hit a loty harder than the rest of your lines

final vote?... technique for having a less crappy verse
I'm not sure how long you guys have been writing or how bored you were when you did this but if you're gonna battle you need to come with your A game... you need solid punches... more personals... more wit and originality... it's cool to go the multi route IF and ONLY when you know how to do it properly... lines need to flow from one to the other effortlessly.... seems like you both ran through a bunch of random thoughts and strung them together.. there were no setups from either of you between lines and neither of you made me say "DAMN!" even once... i never laughed... i never even smiled at any of these lines... i almost cried a few times though...


just my own thoughts... no hate... keep writing... the more you write the better you will get.... keep listening to emcees you wanna emulate.. pattern yaself after them... eventually you will learn what formula works for you and you can develop your styles from there... Broaden your hip-hop pallette... find some older stuff like Souls of Mischief, Tribe Called Quest, Leaders of the New School, EPMD.... mix your stuff up so you can get a better idea of what hip-hop is... stop listening to the BS polluting the airwaves... the more you know about different kinds of rap the better you both will be.
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Old 11-07-09, 12:47 AM   #42
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Tech:
nothin'

Fly-E:
This mutha fucka has spent so much time postin shit
Attemptin to type skits bitch get off shady records dick when ya spit


vote fly ... thats what it is techs a bitch
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