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OYD MAFIA

upping...........reply plz........-_-

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yo plz checkthis

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OYD MAFIA

need emotion, not feeln the voice too much
quality needs help, pops and shit hurt
lyrics.. hard to understand what u saying.. u rushing it like a mofo
sounds like u dont have natural flow or rythem
2/10

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
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your pops are crazy... you sound muffled on the mic.. you rushin your flow at points then slowing down wayyyyy too slow for other parts.. I can barely understand what you saying so i can't really quote your lyrics. You sound like you want to get the song overwith right away, it's like you not feeling what you saying, so no one else is going to feel it either... as far as your delivery, you don't sound very confident on the mic... keep working at it.

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UNF where the hell ya been?

Okay. So I heard your first audio and then I jus listened to this one. Umm you haven't elevated much. You still need to back up from the mic or something. It sounds like you tryna make out with it. The lyrics aren't very clear. You need more emotion in ya lyrics. Doesn't sound boring but it doesn't really make me wanna listen. Keep working on your flow too. Try to make it flow smoothly.

aight im tryin i been away ages doin coursework..thx for feed ppl

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OYD MAFIA

damn, un....you write better than you spit... ya flow is way off.. i listened to a few of ya joints and they all pretty much have the same issues... you sound scared to spit... like somebody is listening... almost like you got stage fright or sumn... sounds like you reading and not letting it flow... a lotta forced lines in ya shyt... ya ideas are cool but ya just don't sound natural at all... you need to memorize ya lines before you record or find a flow that suits you... ya beats are ok... ya quality is as bad as when i first started recording my own stuff... learn to edit ya vocals and adjust ya levels.. there was one track where i couldn't understand anything you were saying... your voice was drowned out by the beat and you sounded muffled... i had to turn it off at the beginning... i know you trying but if you really want it badly enough ya need to try harder and become ya own worst critic... keep it moving and don't let this discourage you... i'm only tryna help...just as everyone else is...one

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aight thx im tryin i got nu trak up betta quality i hope

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