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FireMan......its to that new lil wayne beat for a lil preview mixtape track...i will be re recording in the studio...so the quality wont exactly be like this.....but yea....tell me what u think....

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You already know what I think of it, but Im leaving feed because I love you.

Beat is godly...I was getting all krunk an shit...I was throwin bows and I hit my brother in the mouth. His lip is bleeding. Thanx alot you fuck.

Anyways, flow is tight man, fast paced, stayed on beat...different type flow, but it still worked out nicely for you. Lyrics...I dont even have to go there. You know their always good. Overall, good shit man.

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boo @ you, i was gon use this beat..
flow is a tad choppy, i think cause you tryna spit it fast...
lyrics is hot like usual
im not liking how you keep the hook in really, but w/e aint a big deal.
your emotion and delivery is spot on though
im loving the whole "voice, delivery, emotion" package you got going here...it seriously fits the track well
and again i love your voice...

overall it was kinda a coo lil thing...but id just attempt to improve the flow
props though

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^^^ thanks man..........

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Yo Im the fireman...f...f....f...fireman.

Ha Ha. The hook was cool man. Kinda catchy. The flow i thought was on point for the most part. you might have slipped maybe once. yeah that was pretty good. and the quality wasnt good but you said you was gonna re-record it so i wouldnt worry about that. your mic prescence is pretty good. you have an intersting sounding voice. overall this was pretty good. cant wait for the full version to be released. keep it up.

I liked the intro, the beat's the first Lil John clone type beat I've 'felt' in AGES.

You GOTTA turn your vocals down like 3-5dB. The hook's catchy enough. The mic sounds muffled, but the vocals them selves are clear and consise with a pretty much dead-on flow. The hook sounds like lil wayne. Seems like a cocktease to a pretty damn good track, but I qouldn't do it solo, if I were you. Put 3 different emcees on there and really get the variety going on the track so it stays fresh, cuz that beat is somewhat redundant. I liked it. I'd listen to it if it came on the radio instead of most of the Lil John generics, that's for sure. It's essentially the same thing, just with more intellect so I don't feel like I'm listening to some rhymes that's 1 step above baby talk. Word to that. 1

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haha this was my shit!!
yeah your flow was on piont...man i like how when the beat did other things you still stayed on point..the hook was hot but i think its lil wayne...i wanted to hear more than one verse though...
keep going!!!!

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The beat is so dope. The intro is godly. The flow is wicked. This is a godly track man.

#1...I wud like to collab @ least once

so holla

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Now...beat is pretty coo

wow...wud love to rip a fast flow...been a minute since I kicked one


ur flow is pretty good...wud like to hear more of that fast tongue flow


not bad dawg...

def. have a fresh style


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beat is hot, never heard dis track b4 from lil wayne

not very fast, more medium flow, but jea its on flow
u need better delivery, mixup the flow also
cuz constans fast or w/e gets borring

7/10

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listening:
bEAT is ill, pretty dope yeah, chorus is pretty dope seriously, nice flow very very like it, quality is dope, this is the song of the month seriously and easylie cuz this is fucking ill

damn this is hella tight, even though i've heard the longer version this is a dope verse, your verse was the better compared to that other cats but i still liked it all. Your flow is so tight and fast, so fast but it was very clear too, not twista fast but Ike fast lol. Your lyrics was really hittin hard, delivery was on point as well. overall tight sample verse man, keep droppin.

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Word flow is coo am feelin it fast son delivery there as always lmfao at tha chorus though it was pretty good like dooms said though i woulda put some people on this joint overall it was good though i enjoyed it *d/l's pz...

thanks...uppin..

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