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Old 02-08-04, 05:27 AM   #1
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This Moment Of Honesty

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Induelz

In This Life Of Sin .. My Future's Grim Disputing To Never Win ..
So My Second-Coming Runnin Through & Propellin Nxt To My Kin ..
The Sound Of A Pin .. Drops I'm Wondering Frightened Of My Breath
Anticapting The Calling Of God As I'm Always Dicing With Death ..
The Similarities In My Words Keeps My Sanity Intact With Humanity
So I'm Playing Around The Reaper And Lookin For A Similar Reality
I Try To Stand And Take It Like A Man But These Facists Is Rejectin ..
Any Reason For Their Faults So My Apologies I'm Eaglerly Acceptin ..
Now My Mind Infectin The Demon Inside Hides Behind This Closed Door
Where The Strong Survive The Rest Ponder Around Holed Floors ..
This Terror Relcates Into A Virtue Where Blessin Is Not Embraced ..
In This World Of Hatred, Racists, Hypocrites Lookin At Ya Body To Rape
My Expectations Are Stuck In A Glass Window Condensing A View ..
Where Love Meet Hate And Hate Is Backed Along With A Suspense Virtue
Trying To Meet Wit My Shadow But My Neck Particles Is Dangling ..
Hanging From Hell As The Grip Of My Palms Is My Life Im Managin ..
So Back To Stage One Its Back-Again .. Where My Thoughts Are Locked
My Opinon's Are Whispers And My Emotions Are Only To Ever Run-Amok
My Arms Tired From Beggin To God .. So I'm Just Biting This Evil Stress..
Becoming What I'm Really Meant To Do As I'm Simply Dicing Wit Death ..

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You Racists Inscriminators And Hypocrits , You Must Not Think Of What Your Doing Before You Act , You Dont Think Of Death Until Your Staring Face To Face With It//[You Should Get This , DOnt know What WIll Happen Till It Hits Thenm]
Im Losing My Sanity With Delinquints That Only See Skin Totally Ignoring The Structure Or Peoples Rhymes , Racism N Judgement Coming From All Races White , Indian Not Only Mine//[Black]
Whats The Reason For Hating Because Of The Color Of Someones Skin Or Religion I Dont Understand It Must Be Complicated , The People That Do This Its Like Their Souls Being Slowly Deflated//
The More Its Deflated The More Hate They Inflict On Innocent Human Beings They Get Kicked About Like Old Dolls , They Hadnt Done Shit To Be So Dispiteful At All//
Its Like No Matter How Hard These Poor Defenceless People Try They Can Never Get Up Stream , Racism Still Hasnt Stopped Some Of Its Gotten Worse From The Scenes~Ive~Seen//
Black People For Their Skin Classed In A Lower Level , White People Because Of The Past They Still Seen As Terrible , Indians Because Of Religion Thats Just What They Beleive IN!//
On The News Late AT Night Theres Always Something To DO With A Vicious Attack , Usually Its Rape , Because Of Hate People Need To Get More Intact //
With The Real World They Always Get Caught In The End , Most Hand Themselves In Because They Cant Deal With The Utter Suspence , The Worlds Fates Bloored Like Looking Through A Cob Webbed MicroScope Lens//
People We Got To Start Making Life Easier On Each Other , All These Men And Women Getting Killed Think Of The Strife Your Putting Through The Mothers//
Head Put Yourself In Their Positions When Your Facing The End , You Always Get Hit Back Your Dicing With Death.......//

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Old 02-08-04, 05:33 AM   #2
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Old 04-20-10, 02:48 PM   #3
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Uppin for review dmamit.
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Old 05-10-10, 01:15 PM   #4
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Induelz - Your verse was on point for the most part. I enjoyed the word choice and the structure with the words that coincide within was done pretty well. It was good that you posted your verse 1st.

Dominating-DT - Structure was a bit odd, but the word selection was done good as well. When I began to read your verse, I thought some of the lines were okay...


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