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JpMoney06 | 3 | 37.50% | |
lilchiofthachi | 5 | 62.50% | |
Voters: 8. You may not vote on this poll |
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11-24-04, 08:38 PM | #1 | |
Peoria where u at.Illinois where u at.
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JpMoney06 vs lilchiofthachi
IP: 3F16 2CA3
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5 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 11-27-04 at 08:38 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
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11-24-04, 08:39 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 3F16 2CA3
lilchiofthachi has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-24-04 08:39 PM.
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11-24-04, 08:42 PM | #3 | |
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IP: 1895 EA8A
JpMoNeY06 has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-24-04 08:42 PM.
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11-24-04, 08:50 PM | #4 | |
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IP: 1895 EA8A
lite me up a cigarette so i can start this show/ready to begin with the illest of ill flows/drop a verse like it ain't nuttin/bitches like you r why they made up the word FRONTIN/to worried bout losin and not winnin/you shoulda known that u were gunna lose from the beginnin/wut u gotta run?/i'll take u and ya crews ass, one by one/i can't be defeated so just face it/betta take ya life and erase it/u can't reach my level of rappin/and yes that was ya gurl i just got done tappin/she was great, she gotta nice ass/do u remember that shit from way back in the past/bitch get on ya knees cause u can't last/ima give u the last blast/this battle is over, face it u suck/maybe next time u'll have better luck
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11-24-04, 08:57 PM | #5 | |
Peoria where u at.Illinois where u at.
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IP: 3F16 2CA3
This nigga Jp money think he on my level,
take his honeys and stand tall like a rebel/ This nigga jacks off 2 gay porn on da internet, poor nigga all his shit at home is a renter set/ i dont think nigga kno he fuckin wit Chi's God, rhymes creative thats y im editor in tha Squad/ U better post a hot verse if u wanna beat me, ask ur sergent he gone say u gotta retreat G/ If niggas dont sleep dis battle itll be a Ko, real cats say Chi's verse cold Jp's not even SoSo |
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11-25-04, 03:06 AM | #6 |
New to RB
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This was feedback posted for lilchiofthachi
IP: 615F 6336
i had to go wit lilchio cuz of da flow and the way he stuck out his rhymes. jp u need to wrk on da flow and da word choice, fix those and ur set. still my vote gos to lilchio
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11-25-04, 03:22 AM | #7 | |
Lyrical Prosperity
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This was feedback posted for lilchiofthachi
IP: 6C76 BECF
lilchiofthachi....um no...... work on your wordplay... checking polls
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12-06-04, 11:27 PM | #8 | |
Peoria where u at.Illinois where u at.
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IP: 3F16 2CA3
uppin for votes man for tha 50 character thing u gotta have
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12-07-04, 01:37 AM | #9 |
Middle Weight
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IP: 7EE8 F41B
Voted For: lilchiofthachi
Second guy wins for his verse being readable. You guys need to learn what a punch is though, at least do flow if you can't throw a punch. Wordplay, wit, etc.. .................................... Seriously wack battle.................................
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12-07-04, 01:44 AM | #10 |
Light Weight
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This was feedback posted for lilchiofthachi
IP: 3240 794D
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12-12-04, 09:31 PM | #11 | |
Peoria where u at.Illinois where u at.
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IP: 3F16 2CA3
uppin for some more votes i need this bitch closed
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12-25-04, 07:35 PM | #12 | |
Peoria where u at.Illinois where u at.
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IP: 3F16 2CA3
honest votes will be returned if u vote on dis battle
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12-26-04, 11:26 AM | #13 | ||
~SAINT SINNER~
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
Voted For: lilchiofthachi
sorry, but chi takes this hands down. chi... you came really simple in this, but your flow was decent and your structure was on point. you had some okay ideas/concepts, but i feel that you didnt capitolize on them properly. some of your verse seemed more like self glorification rather then battling.....be careful with that. work on your punches and personals........vocab wouldnt hurt either. jp... sorry bruh, but you came with some played lines. your vocab was bad and your structure was horrible. no offense playboy, but i wasnt really entertained by your piece at all. try working on structure, punches, vocab, multies, flow and personals. drop some pieces in the open mic forum before you jump into battles.....it'll help you to prepare for text battles better. dont let my comments get you down......im only trying to help. hold it down pimp. oner... s.v.......c.s.
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12-28-04, 11:45 PM | #14 | |
Knock out kings fur life
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IP: 07D4 5143
Voted For: lilchiofthachi
flow chi rhyming chi vocab chi strucutre chi imagry chi personal tie hits chi opener-closure chi and hey hit up on my bat in my link iam down one and be honest peace. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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01-06-05, 09:05 PM | #15 | |
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IP: F745 50DD
Voted For: JpMoNeY06
this is feedback for both YOU=WEAK YOUvs.LexiKon=AWINFORME
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