You wanna rematch dis shitt?...I'll crush you...just let me put da verse in better structure...it'll be over...

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Voted For: Nick Fletcher

....You Think Ya Got Vicious Rhymes?...Ya Punches 'Cant Find Me', So I Say Ya 'Diss Is Blind'...Quit Runnin Fa Best, That Positions Mines...You Wack, Only Time RV Sees a "Delivery From Nick" Is At "Christmas Time"...
...A lot of stuff here is unneccesary;the diss is blind thing is kinda played;But the Christmas line was good.
....Watch As My Scripts Tear This Dude...Laugh At Ya Feel Of Defeat As You Sit There And Lose...Retaliation Is Futile..So I'll Critically Diss You Til "Let Is Barely Seen" Like "Strict Parent Rules"...
...Ok,but it Seems like your trying too hard to pull out a nameplay.
...Why Do You Brawl Wit Tha Best?..Like "Shoutin Fa The Grim Reaper" You've Just "Called To Ya Death"...You'll Get Left Mauled Wit Tha Rest, You Can Say "My Verse Tripped You" Da Way You "Fall To My Text"...
...Good
....You Think You Tha Hardest, Ya Aint Dawg...I'll Murk Any MC, Regardless Which Name Called...Fuckin Wit Punch, Watch A Part of Ya Fame Fall...Cause Im Quick Ta "Fuck Up Etch" Like "Artist Who Cant Draw"...
...uhh,again..seems like your trying too hard to pull out a nameplay.

You wack ass gay bitch, fuck the rap game, I’m a put you out
I see you say dopeness speaks for itself huh…
..no wonder you never shut your mouth.
....Good
I’ll fuck this kid easy, with a few near fake personals and rhymes,
Ya see whilst I may stretch the truth, he’ll just stretch his lines.
...Acctually,this was a fake personal;I read his verse,and he had multis in between his lines,his shit flowed IMO.
Ok, so I’m dropping half-assed, but I don’t wanna rub it in his face,
Cuz his lines are so poor his verse is considered a charity case!!
...Kinda played.
I don’t know you PL, but your skills ain’t impressive to folk
Ya punchlines get a laugh though, cuz they’re beyond a fucking joke.
...ehh,Ok..

Ok,this was a good battle here..
Really close,but I think Nick Flethcher barely edged it out..
PL,first off,you got a lot of uneccesary things in you verse.And 2nd,it seems to me your trying too hard,or maybe you were desperate for a personal or something.Cause pulling the "let" and "etch" out of fletcher didn't work.The rest of your lines were good too..

NF had fake personals,saying teh other guy's lines were stretched,when it wasn't,and had a semi played line (charity)..but he still won......BARELY.

Vote-Nick Fletcher

MAN....dis some bullshitt...I aint losin ta dis nigga...Im so much better than em...^^talkin bout I tried to hard ta pull out nameplays...I can see tha "LET" line...but tha last bar?...dat shitt was straight...dat nigga shitt was garbage...

Fuck Dis Battle...!!! Im too complexed fa yall niggas...I guess I gotta turn it down a notch...and I gotta put my linez is yall boring structure ta win...dis site is brainwashed on stupid shitt...

Can yall just vote on who got more skill and not who can make tha better structure?...fuck structure...this is text..text aint supposed ta have dat much flow...you prolly dont even know how to arrange it ta have flow...

man, fuck it...just get dis bullshitt over wit...

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Did I say one thing about your structure in my vote?.....

PL, you clearly don't know what you're talking about.

You are dropping a verse like you would say if you was freestyling, which is technically just audio without a beat to it. With text you have to do a different sort of style and lay it out differently, that is why a lot of textcees can't do audio, and a lot of audio cats can't do text.


So, shut the fuck up and take the loss. You are turning into a carbon copy of MarvJay who cried the 3 times I beat his ass.

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A LIFE OF CHRYME

Homez..I'll wreck you fa real..if folks just look pass my fuckin structure, I won nigga...but they just cant...you niggas are readin, dont you get it?...text--...fuck it...more votes please...

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