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the_DukE 1 16.67%
Wicked One 5 83.33%
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Old 12-14-05, 04:07 AM   #16
the_DukE
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Aiight, first of all, wicked one, i already gave you enough credit....you got skillz, but c'mon man, do you really think this shoulda been a knock out?? i actually got one more vote, but that nigga didnt explain his reason good enough...dont hate dawg....a battle is a battle...
 
Old 12-14-05, 04:22 PM   #17
Wicked One
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I know its cool...manye i just got back from a bball game and we lost n shit...so thats why i was mad n shit...my bad man...UPPIN
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Old 12-14-05, 04:44 PM   #18
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Voted For: Wicked One

Look, your trap should shut close, i bust flows...
Penetrate the thin film, u virgin, i even got u bleeding through your fuckin nose..
...Ehh,ok.
Don't even attempt threats, your even worse this time around...
Im turnin spars to beatdowns, don't even break sweats when I beat clowns...
...Blah,boring.
I'm wild but ya'll endorse my style and I'mma do ya'll all a favor and abort this child...
When I put the heat to his face it'll make his mouth brighter than Paul Wall's Smile...
.......ok
Two-hundred and fifty with muscle, jack, as it still climbs...
Shit, without all the extra weight u couldn't carry anyone of my rhymes...
...Good
In this battle u still wont make a comeback, u aint nearly that nice...
I mean come on now, were still waiting on jesus christ...
...decent
U can't fuck with me, realize you cant do me nada...
Spar with me? bitch please, your only trying to out run lava...
...No
Fuck the drama, your persona's taken enough hits...
I just left this cat covered in one of my day after thanksgiving shits...
...OK

this nigga ate cement for breakfast, got him shittin bricks/
rhymes suckin like some parasites verbalizin ticks//
....Ehh,weak
make u feel like youz in oz wit my lyrical skills/
sayin "theres no place like home" while ya clickin ya heels//
....Weak
droppin sticky-icky bombs one hit will make u quit/
got u diagnosed wit cottonmouth, unable to spit//
...Ok
this is it, flap jack flow, bisquick verbals i be flippin/
the outcome got you EARy, now ya too afraid to listen//
....Decent
i need some toilet paper, cuz im almost done shittin/
walkin off with a victory, makin me greater than britain//
...Good
on your knees, kiss my toes and get ready for de-FEET/
wit my words i took your paddle, now you up shits creek/..da-feet/defeat lines are played the fuck out.

I vote Wicked one.He just came better.Duke came wack with played shit.De-feet lines would have been ok...like,5 years ago.

Vote-Wicked One

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Old 12-19-05, 04:29 PM   #19
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Voted For: Wicked One

Wicked One

Look, your trap should shut close, i bust flows...
Penetrate the thin film, u virgin, i even got u bleeding through your fuckin nose..
^lmao at last line, first was bleh but second was pretty funny hehe

Don't even attempt threats, your even worse this time around...
Im turnin spars to beatdowns, don't even break sweats when I beat clowns...
^not really feelin it but its decent bar though

I'm wild but ya'll endorse my style and I'mma do ya'll all a favor and abort this child...
When I put the heat to his face it'll make his mouth brighter than Paul Wall's Smile...
^haha, good comparison right here, nice punch as well

Two-hundred and fifty with muscle, jack, as it still climbs...
Shit, without all the extra weight u couldn't carry anyone of my rhymes...
^hehe, solid shit, nothing WHOA but solid enough ya kno

In this battle u still wont make a comeback, u aint nearly that nice...
I mean come on now, were still waiting on jesus christ...
^lolz, decent but not as good as previous one

U can't fuck with me, realize you cant do me nada...
Spar with me? bitch please, your only trying to out run lava...
^solid, not like the other solid one, this was bit less but still aight

Fuck the drama, your persona's taken enough hits...
I just left this cat covered in one of my day after thanksgiving shits...
^haha...this just killed it...nice stuff this closer

Overall solid battle, had few fillers in there though but got funny shit in it as well.



the_DukE

this nigga ate cement for breakfast, got him shittin bricks/
rhymes suckin like some parasites verbalizin ticks//
^aight decent opener, aight wordplay

make u feel like youz in oz wit my lyrical skills/
sayin "theres no place like home" while ya clickin ya heels//
^hmmm not really feelin this line right here

droppin sticky-icky bombs one hit will make u quit/
got u diagnosed wit cottonmouth, unable to spit//
^good last line, first is bleh though but solid

this is it, flap jack flow, bisquick verbals i be flippin/
the outcome got you EARy, now ya too afraid to listen//
^again last line is better than first one, work on ya build-ups

i need some toilet paper, cuz im almost done shittin/
walkin off with a victory, makin me greater than britain//
[b]^uhmmmm...no...this wasn't working at all...

on your knees, kiss my toes and get ready for de-FEET/
wit my words i took your paddle, now you up shits creek//
^uhm I seen the feet-line lots of times already

Get more creativity in ya lines, concepts were good here n there, work on em build-ups too but ya got potential for sure
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Old 12-19-05, 09:58 PM   #20
Wicked One
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Old 12-20-05, 02:24 PM   #21
Wicked One
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Old 12-21-05, 04:25 AM   #22
the_DukE
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come on y'all, just vote on this shit and lets get this done....i dont care if i lose man...this nigga got skillz...i aint doubtin that....it was a good battle....
 
Old 12-21-05, 02:28 PM   #23
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Old 12-21-05, 11:07 PM   #24
$Da BAttLeKinG$
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Voted For: Wicked One

Heres how I see it...

Wicked-- You had a basically better verse...attempted multies on some lines...seems like yo verse was a lil bit more complxed than Duke's...structure could've been better...flow was on at some points...good verse tho..

Duke-- Yo verse was too simple...it flowed nicely, you had better structure, but yo punches werent complexed enough...you beat em in everything but multies and punches...just work on complexing those 2, and you straight...

peace...
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