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Track me and my man Envee did..leave some feed aight..

www.soundclick.com/envee

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up man.........

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I heard this beat somewhere else, it's a good beat.

First verse, I HAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE whne someone doubles up on their vocals for an entire verse. 9/10 times it comes out crappy. the lyrics were okay, nottihng that had me going "hmm...never looked it at that way" or anything eye opening.

Second verse, lyrics are okay, but against that doubled vocal track. The lyrics had more energy to it than the last verse for sure, but still nothing that made me go "oh shit son!!" and jumpick somebody. better than average.

Third verse essentialyl a re-spit of the first. nothing new to the song, jsut more of the same. it's okay. Not BAD, jsut don't stand out in a sea of songs.

Oh yeah, the verses didn't match the type of beat imo. beat was really laidback where as the lyrics were essentialyl braggodocio. The quality was good enough. Honest feed as always. 1

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I actually liked the first verse, dude rode the beat nicely
His delivery and timing was on point

2nd Verse, his timing was off on some lines, some lines he jumped on the beat to soon
but at the end he began to ride the beat decent though

3rd Verse, he rode the beat nicely again I like the fact he used a staggered style

I'm like Dooms, the verses didn't match the verse, I was expecting something darker



7/10

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thanks uppinn..

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BEat is tight as hell wuts it called....first verse was nice.....lyrics is cool,,,voice dubz was done good....i didnt come out like omen he over does it...2nd dude is cool nice verse fam...3rd verse was cool 2....your delivery is gud...overall 9/10

collab? lol

didnt u show me this awhile ago? lol at "get em bolic!"

yea i heard this b4 u respit it... yea i like ya flow, like tha delivery, nyce lyrics, smack u offa ya orbit...

now ya boy comes in. he's good, but seems like theres sum forcefullness in his voice, but i like him, he's ill, reminds me of k nice a lil bit...

third verse... aight d again, flow is pretty much tha same as first verse, nyce tho... a tiny fall off near tha middle... but nothin big, i was feelin this track, ya boy has a good voice, but u guys meshed well, was cool , i like this beat too...

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best Audio Head May- the Omen*

OMEN ON MYSPACE

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