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Voted For: G

Structure - Tie, both of the lines were even, nne stretched

Punchlines - I honestly liked G's a little more, more creative and he utilized words more, like the fade thing, plus he doesn't need to explain all of them..

personals - none really stuck out, they would of helped too..

Wordplay - both was nice, both sides had okay rhymes the sounded well, and both had nice flow..

Overall - it came down to who had the less played punches and it was G, you win this because of better and more entertaining content that made for a better verse.. no hate, i got a battle with him too, but this was honest as hell..

return the favor cuzo, with a drop in mines, thnx..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=144411

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Voted For: G

I slice this his fat out of his face, make his appearance droopy,
cuz “Empire”s verse ‘bombs’, and is pointless like Fat Joe’s movie
8/10 good opener, and good personal maybe

This real simple black and white like old ass movies
You couldnt stall on my verse if you was a broke ass hoopty
hmmm kinda same rhyme scheme and i have no idea what a hoopty is 5/10

Crack him like an egg, flip him, and make him fry snappy,
Stab him, and piss on his corpse…so he can “die-nasty”.
this is a good closer with a decent personal on the last line 8/10

Uneffective punches couldnt hold weight if you write in a gym
Ya shit need too elevate you like a kite with no wind
not a good closer at all, the shit dont even rhyme unles you pronounce gym like gime, but yeh 4/10

overall G took this with better wordplay and makin me laugh a bit

Voted For: G

oh shit tht was mad funny.I am lovin this ni99as punches and his metas U took thsbattle justbecause of them.Thats my opinion.!!

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