than i accomplished my goal if you think this is anywhere close to as good as the original cuz i thought the original was dope because it was and made money for them, so if i could make a song better than a song that made the originators a lot of many i definately accomplished my goal. if thats true though i should have money in my pocket right now for making the better song, but i dont feel i made the better song, i just made a different song that no one else could make. i want to make money off of songs and if peoples opinions don't help that happen their oppinions mean nothing to me. so please cordinate your opionons on my songs in a way that could improve the song to a point i could make money with it. since no one on here knows how to make money with their songs other than, hmmm no one really on this site, i dont get why they feel their opinions actually matter even the slightest.
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only reason i respect lm's opionons is because his music is marketable, so he has the best clue in my opinion as to what sells. theres very few people on here that i could play the song to people at a party or anyone i know that even enjoys rap and have them not want me to change the song.

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