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Old 09-29-04, 11:01 PM   #1
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Down To Ride - Scenario/Fluidmoon

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Hook - Fluidmoon
I was always down to ride my boo, you know this is true
But the perils of being young, in love, i needed time without you
To now see the truth, if i was being used,made sure i wasnt just confused
I know we had our problems in the past, things would get so hectic
Lets put this all behind us,erase bad times, and try to rest it
Cus i need you in my life now, my love, if you still would have me
I cant go without the taste and smell of your skin, you drive me crazy
You encase me, this love,above all else, i still miss you
Can't wait to kiss and feel you
knowing our dreams would come true is a blessing, i just wanna thank you





Scenario
now what happened girl cause we started off good
i gave u all my love in every way that i could
from day one i knew that u was the one for me
but things got kinda bad and it was no fun for me
when things got rough that's when u decided to split
reminiscing on days that we would ride in my whip
when ya left it felt like a sharp pain in the side of my hip
thinking of ways to calm down trying not to flip
our relationship hurt at times like u was trying to pop a zit
most of our dinners turned into mcdonald trips
i was low budget but wanted to give u the world
and even though were not together ya still my favorite girl





Hook - Fluidmoon
I was always down to ride my boo, you know this is true
But the perils of being young,in love, i needed time without you
To now see the truth, if i was being used,made sure i wasnt just confused
I know we had our problems in the past, things would get so hectic
Lets put this all behind us, erase bad times, and try to rest it
Cus i need you in my life now, my love, if you still would have me
I cant go without the taste and smell of your skin, you drive me crazy
You encase me, this love,above all else, i still miss you
Can't wait to kiss and feel you
knowing our dreams would come true, is a blessing, i just wanna thank you





Scenario
now ya know, girl from day one ya seemed so fine
our lives together perfectly intertwined
flashbacks of u always pop up into my mind
with u i didn't have to go far, love was easy to find
but i never thought that u would go and leave me behind
it always seemed when i was with u we were just breezing through time
and i was attracted to u cause u seemed like u was a teasable dime *
did u have a reason for loving me? cause there was a reason for mine
whenever i looked at u it was like u was teasing my mind
cause u were so sexy, ya always had me high like i was taking extacsy
rainy days or sunny ones i would lay u down next to me
and u complete me like A to G all the way from their to Z





Hook - Fluidmoon
I was always down to ride my boo, you know this is true
But the perils of being young,in love, i needed time without you
To now see the truth, if i was being used,made sure i wasnt just confused
I know we had our problems in the past, things would get so hectic
Lets put this all behind us, erase bad times, and try to rest it
Cus i need you in my life now, my love, if you still would have me
I cant go without the taste and smell of your skin, you drive me crazy
You encase me, this love,above all else, i still miss you
Can't wait to kiss and feel you
knowing our dreams would come true, is a blessing, i just wanna thank you





*she likes to tease a playa
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Old 09-29-04, 11:44 PM   #2
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Old 09-30-04, 12:39 PM   #3
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Old 09-30-04, 12:56 PM   #4
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yo this won't that bad kid..you need to make this an audio if you not..fluid on the hook and everything...nice stuff indeed
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Old 09-30-04, 04:24 PM   #5
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Old 09-30-04, 08:23 PM   #6
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Old 10-01-04, 12:07 AM   #7
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tight!!...scenario your flow's dope with good rhyme's. you used some dope multi's in this . nice job.

fluidmoon. Your hook fitted into this nicely.

maybe you should do this audio that way you can get the emotion into it..
overall this is a dope collab 9/10...pz
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Old 10-01-04, 12:22 AM   #8
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Ayo this shits hot! very nice drop both of yall... fluid, i was feelin that hook! and my nigga scenario that shit was off tha chains son. good shit both of yall.
please drop some feedback in my latest open mic, holla

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Old 10-01-04, 12:24 AM   #9
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Old 10-01-04, 08:37 AM   #10
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Cant belive you haven't got much feedback this is hott, both come well nice.
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Old 10-01-04, 09:08 AM   #11
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waddup as always it's jus like my situation cept im da girl n my mans sayin that shit to me...but not quite as creatively or as adorable as that..ur shit always makes meh blush jus readin it n it aint even for me...do u actually show these to ur girl?
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Old 10-01-04, 02:03 PM   #12
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Old 10-01-04, 02:13 PM   #13
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thats some nice shit peepz, the collab of the sexes. Yeah this is what we here for, not as much fo battles as fo the open mics, this shit is fiya, man, keep it up.
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Old 10-01-04, 02:51 PM   #14
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hit my shit up then son
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Old 10-01-04, 04:46 PM   #15
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