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09-29-04, 03:23 PM | #1 | ||||
L.E
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Jenn
IP: 87C5 5C3A
...A'yo... ...This is to my girl...Jenn... You make me feel....so loved and so specail... No matter what I do...no matter my credentials I want to show you...how much I love and feel... Nothing is fake...the first time I've ever felt real I don't cry anymore...you make me feel alive... I was so down...so lonely...I couldn't survive But then you were by my side...I feel your touch... Not even Romeo...could have loved Juliet this much But as such...people...loved ones try to make it end... But what they're not gettin'...it's not make pretend When I look into your eyes...all's I see is God's grace... I don't deserve it...but he has given me your pretty face I respect you...I want to keep you out of harms way... These people around us...make me wanna move far away With you of course...I want us to be happy no matter what... My mom and your dad...all's they are tryin to do is damage us You have captured my heart....I am a diehard fanatic... I wanna show you love...I wanna show you what's romantic I just want to be with you...through the good, and the badder... I just want to say somethin' now... ...I love you...and that's all that matters... ...From the heart, Jenn... |
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09-29-04, 03:36 PM | #2 | ||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: CDAA 2D0A
lmfao quit playin lmfao you a heartless mutha fucka this is a con to get all up in herr lmfao good lil song.......
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09-29-04, 03:38 PM | #3 | ||||
L.E
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IP: 87C5 5C3A
Haha motha fucker...no it's true from the heart...but I get up in her anyway haha. Thanks for the feed though...haha how many times you gotta change ya damn name?
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09-29-04, 03:41 PM | #4 | ||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: CDAA 2D0A
lmfao alot this my last one....but damn i feel good today i had a dream i dated nichole richie last night......i wuv her...lol its tru...
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09-29-04, 03:58 PM | #5 | ||||
L.E
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IP: 87C5 5C3A
Haha...yeah right that won't be your last one...uppin' for some more feed on this.
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09-29-04, 04:33 PM | #6 | ||||
L.E
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IP: 87C5 5C3A
Uppin' for some more feed on this. Come on people.
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09-29-04, 04:44 PM | #7 | ||||||
hullabaloser
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IP: 07E0 A9F2
Man that was deep, came from the heart and you can tell.
If everybody in the world had someone they could feel like that about, it would be a better place. Much Respect, that was great
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09-29-04, 04:57 PM | #8 | ||||
L.E
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IP: 87C5 5C3A
Thanks dawg...uppin' for feed.
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09-29-04, 10:28 PM | #9 | |||||||
bingo!
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IP: A0DC A88A
nice job..good emotion..nice shit all around im proud to know you..hit em up on aim..
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09-30-04, 12:24 PM | #10 | ||||
L.E
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IP: 87C5 5C3A
Thanks...uppin' for some more feeback.
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09-30-04, 01:59 PM | #11 | ||||
L.E
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IP: 87C5 5C3A
Uppin' for some more feed on this...
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09-30-04, 03:51 PM | #12 | ||||||
Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
nice drop!! You had your flow on point.You were writing from the heart.You came with a nice rhyme scheme.A bit simple at time's but it didnt really change the effect of the peice. Nice drop keep them coming...........pz
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10-01-04, 10:53 AM | #13 | ||||
L.E
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IP: 87C5 5C3A
A'ight thanks...uppin' for some more feed on this.
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10-01-04, 11:26 AM | #14 | |||||||
New to RB
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IP: 9253 500F
awwwwww thats adorable u should give that to her if u didnt yet
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10-01-04, 08:43 PM | #15 | |||||
Houdini
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IP: 3240 794D
Look Limited...I could use all this shit in battles, But man...Its from the heart I'll leave this...Its deep and Nice man. One of your more, No joke man Very touching Uppin this for limited.
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