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Old 07-28-03, 05:50 PM   #1
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~"Reppin"~

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Check my track "Reppin" just started this soundclick page too....enjoy....and lets get some feedback if possible....

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/glockpusha.htm
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Old 07-29-03, 04:21 AM   #2
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damm people do sleep on these pieces shii....
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Old 07-29-03, 04:39 PM   #3
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zzzzzz freal
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Old 07-30-03, 02:48 AM   #4
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iight w/e no feedback i aint fixin tah front...
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Old 07-30-03, 03:42 AM   #5
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how can you listen to jedi mind and sound like that?

seriously though you just didnt flow. nothin personal man im just high as shit.

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Old 07-30-03, 05:29 PM   #6
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Aight i'll show some love, just remember to return it...

Aight, the beat is nice on this, the flow is kinda choppy off and on at times, the lyrics are content are decent for the beat...i think overall you need to increase your flow, and you're set, good drop

return the love and drop some feedback
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Old 07-30-03, 08:16 PM   #7
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iight thanx yo imma work on audios freal and imma get blazed and write some lyrics haha uppin.....
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Old 07-30-03, 11:20 PM   #8
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this was garbage....no type of delivery....no flow, and lyrics was the main thing i wasn't feeling....show more emotion when u spit, organize your lyrics properly, and ur delivery has to be on point with the beat feel me.....HOLLA




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Old 07-31-03, 05:05 AM   #9
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^ knows what hes talkin about


sorry about last nite hahah anyway. if you use a simpler beat maybe you could flow better. also the rhymes and structure were very simple, i think if you added adjectives and shit like that.

runnin with the west coast until the day i die/
im smokin that blue haze that elevate me to a skyscraper high/
we get by
my crew gon find you and da hydrashoks ensure you die/

somethin like that. na mean but first pick a simpler beat to flow to.

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Old 08-01-03, 01:13 AM   #10
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yuh i like da beat but u know its like my pilot track first one thats crappy and more elevation will be put in to tha audios but i admit im workin on dis shi thanx tho.....
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