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Old 02-14-04, 02:49 AM   #1
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wogzta & FormulaMC - Origins Of The Two

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[chorus]
Where Did We Go To And Go Through? What Did We Encounter And Conquer?
Mounted The Top-Of, This Divide And Split It For Two Lyrical Monsters
Wogzta, Formula, Ready To Lead Into The Future With Out Of This World Teachings
Seeing Is Believing, And You See It, So Believe It's A New Beginning...

[verse 1 - FormulaMC]
I Ride The Beat On The Tables, Thread The Needle
Want To Disrupt The Rap Game, Like Yoko Did The Beatles
But In An Instant, Shit Shifts And Change Is More Than Sporadic
Like A Crack Addict On The Streets, You Can't Break The Habits
You Can Make A Balance, But Other Shit Will Often Be
Placed In Your Way N Soon To Me, It'll Be A Coffin I See
Cough Then I Bleed, I Give It All On The Mic, No Other Choice
But When I Talk, I'm Mimed, On The Corner With A Guitar But No Voice
Poor, Case Open Hoping For Spare Dollars To Be Thrown In
I Coulda Been Ill, But Past Drug Problems Has Dope Sewn In
Lookin' At Pops, We Both Grown Men, It's Time For Me To Leave The Nest
Time For Me Relieve All The Stress, I Believe This Is The Test
Can I Pull Through ? And Finally See A Brighter Horizon ?
Or Will My Mind Play Tricks On Me N Make The Sun Disguised N
Dressed As The Moon, Not Surprising, Happier Days Have Vanished
Frantic, I Pushed Panic But The Damn Cancer Had Me Satanic
It Was Fuck Everyone, Live For Me, I Thought I'd Survive
But Who Pulled The Plug On Rap's Respirator ? The Music's Not Alive
And By Five, We Had The Four, The Score Hit Three, Down To Two. .
Wogzta N Formula, Tall Standing, Demanding To Teach The Few

[chorus]

[interlude - wogzta]
To understand the whole story...
You must go back to the beginning...

[verse 2 - wogzta]
In the 7th Circle of Emcee Hell, an alliance was formed
A crew lead by two demon kings where defiance was scorned
Through volcanic rhymes and explosive preachin' they gathered minions
And built an army with which they would shatter billions
Of inferior creatures, who believed puppets could kill
Until they stood before The Two, engulfed in an eruption of skill
Their strings were cut and their show was over with no encore
Enemies had no use left, put aside like the over-flown Concorde
Death came so swiftly, the duo became known as the "Instants"
Without moving a limb they could make you weaker than the bone of an infant
But this was Hell, not Heaven and dissention came to the team
They started to fall apart faster than the Nazi Regime
Some of the minions wanted to appeal to the masses
So they began actin' like Angels and shipped of skill in a basket
Heaven opened its doors, and the traitors strayed off course
But there were too many of them to be takin' back by force
So the fools prospered, and began to believe they were dope
The few that remained loyal to the roots were in need of some hope
Creepin' up slow, we're ready to revive the dominance of our crew
And explain the ancient origins of The Two...

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Old 02-14-04, 08:37 AM   #2
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uppin...... lets get some honest feedback please......
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Old 02-14-04, 09:42 AM   #3
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aiight this was sum ill ass shyt rite here....both of u did ur thing and it came out really good, it had vocab, multis,personals,and nice wordplay, the only thing i would suggest is to change the title to sumthing more eye catchin so u can get more feedback...besdies dat nice drop on both of ur sides......
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Old 02-14-04, 01:18 PM   #4
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Upppppppp, leave links.
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Old 02-14-04, 01:49 PM   #5
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I read this earlier and I don't know why I didn't reply?...anywho...I was liking this you guys came very strong with multis(this was full of'em),wogzta i only read few pieces of yours and I'm impressed and Formula..I think you are coming up..moving on up~~~~my sig~~Click~Click~~~
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Old 02-14-04, 01:58 PM   #6
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wow mass props on this....it was almost fire stuf....damn nice imagery and just ill...i was feelin this a lot..stay up guys....
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Old 02-14-04, 07:32 PM   #7
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^ aight thanks for all the nice feedback.... upping.....

ps. penskills, i'll check your link
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Old 02-15-04, 03:24 AM   #8
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Old 02-15-04, 09:07 PM   #9
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Old 02-16-04, 03:08 AM   #10
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Old 02-16-04, 07:24 AM   #11
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Want To Disrupt The Rap Game, Like Yoko Did The Beatles

^^Form,,, this was def the best line in the collab... tight...
i thought you both came strong with this.... some nice wordplay and good syllable count,, got a nice flow going, both were pretty well matched for a collab, sometimes their too different to really go, but these went good.... nice work.... you make a good team... i'll be looking for the next.......
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Old 02-17-04, 12:07 AM   #12
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^ thanks for the nice words about the collab..... upping
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Old 02-17-04, 04:57 AM   #13
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Pretty Good in my Opinion. Both had Flow.
You Guys Had a Different Ryme Scheme Tho For the Same Song or Wuteva Tho. I like your Multies in Some Lines. And Formula's Meta's. Wogzta I thought Your Verse was Worded Pretty Good. Bringing Back History And shit. Blah.
Nice over-all Verses. Keep this Up. Get at Me.
Peep this Battle if you Bored. Aight.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114862

Here's My Open Mic Too.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114861
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Old 02-17-04, 05:16 AM   #14
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^ right... thanks for the honest feedback, its heaps appreciated... peace
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Old 02-18-04, 12:26 AM   #15
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