^ hay kings....we gotta battle going on....u mind dropping ur verse....

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..........uppin for votes on this shit............

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Voted For: Raw King

Vote:Raw King

structure: Reed-his was a lil less confusing unlike king wit all dem damn periods

personals:king- he said a lot of things that showed what he thought his skill could do and it all cane harder than reed

punches:king- he really did his homework his punches were more direct (usin quotes and stuff)
multis: about the same i aint really see too much a difference here
flow:Reed- although a lil simple his flowed better cuz it was more organized you could automatically see what rhymed and what went together

vocab:both kida lackin wasnt too complex

originality:king- his stlye hit harder and was had more complex lines which a couple needed explanation

overall:king he came harder and more direct despite his organization

Vote: Raw king

R~S~S

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My lyrics stay nothing but nice I use them to bring u down to ur grave after my sacrifice

if you KNO ME you cant UNKNO ME unless u wanna DENY ME

..........good looking out dawg...thanks for the vote......(still putting periods every were nigga)................... .................

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Voted For: Reed

Ummm ...

Being that i can actually read Reed's verse without getting lost and trying to find out what word is supposed to rhyme with what. My Vote goes to Reed.

Both lacked in punches and flow.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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.Open battles.

| vs Raw King | vs OneStepBeyond |

Im A Punchline Champion ..
You Got Rhymes But I Heard It All Before Like Sunshine Anderson

Voted For: Raw King

both verses were pretty week but raw king came better

neither had punches

reed had simple rhyme scheme

oh shit!!!3 years later...we get a vote on one of my battles out side the league!!!! damn dogg....good looking out homie...drop a link if u need me to vote honestly in one of ur battles.

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