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Old 11-12-05, 05:17 PM   #1
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True love is really rae to find

yet its so hard, you couldn't compare it

its one of a kind, everything new turns out old

like a lost memory, tears dropped since you havent been remebering me
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Old 11-13-05, 04:26 PM   #2
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wow good one here i like how just cause its 2 bars doesent mean that it doesnt say much.........good drop fo real...
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Old 12-01-05, 10:35 PM   #3
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likein the poem short but good .......... nicce... GK
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Old 12-11-05, 03:19 AM   #4
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thanks for the comments. uppin for some more here..
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Old 12-11-05, 01:42 PM   #5
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Very short but much more emotional than the other 2. Quite honestly, this may be your best poem out of the three I have just read. Your vocab is much more colorful and your structure was unique. It was heart-felt and also had a sweet ending.

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Old 12-14-05, 07:31 PM   #6
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LOL!! it was Very Short i already knowticed buh well . lol. thanks.
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