Checckity Checck Checck' ...!!!!!!!!! 'Im In' .. Haha' ...

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Also, the lines in unlimited jus like you wanted. Here I go, yo:


You get guys to vote for you… by showin’ them yo pics
You get yo paycheck, after they done showin’ you their dicks

You can pull off all that shit… but I will still win
You will have a 7th loss… before we even “fin”

Battlin’ only newbies… girl… you’re a wussy
You’re rhymes are as tight… as Paris Hilton’s pussy

And that’s very loose… jus to let your fine ass kno
Sleepin’ wit a different guy, each night, y’all are hoes

Girl, I’m not one to be fucked wit. I be 8-2, yo
The crowd be lovin’ me… while they be booin’ you, hoe

At not following rules… you are definitely the master
I’ll rip you into 420 pieces, and turn you into a disaster

Your rhymes are very thin... jus like a tooth pic
If you were a teacher... you would make the "Class sic"

You make the whole English language... look like a fuckin' joke
If you look up DisasterPeice in the dictionary, you'll get, "See choke"

You're a fuckin' yellow belly... like Spongebob and Pikachu
You can't even spell "Piece" right. What the fuck is wrong wit you?

If you fuck wit me... I'll get you the hell outta Atlanta
I'll have you swimmin' wit the D-Rays... like they be doin' in Tampa (Tampa Bay Devil Rays; MLB team that sucks lol)

Ok, DP your turn. Don't think it was that hot, but whateva.

SpuL My Little Bitch He 'Played-Into-My-Hands',/
I Told Him What To Rap And He 'Followed-On-Command',/
UnderStand You Cant Lie Or Deny "While-Under-Oath',/
You Can't Rap Or Free But Still Your 'Trying-To-Do-Both',/
The Jury Is In, The Judgement Has 'Been-Passed',/
Only Back Up You Provide Is Jackin Some Gay 'Up-The-A$$',/
Legit Or Not Bombs You Drop Arent 'Fuckin-Hot',/
Your Faggot 'Vocab', Overloads The Braincess 'You-Aint-Got',/
Beat Me Is the Lottery, Something Ur Punch 'A$$-Can-Win',/
I Must Admit Your Canverous A$$ Is Getting 'Under-My-Skin',/
SPuL You Remind Me Of This Fucka I Seen On 'The-Tv',/
Lyle Lovett Was His Name And He Had No 'Talent-You-See',/
But He Still Tried, Numerous Times 'He-Was-Denied',/
Looked Like The Village Idiot So You And Him 'Coincide',/
You Dar To Fuckin Preach, With No 'Skill-or-Technique',/
Only MC Currently Speaks As I Watch Your 'Lips-Leak',/
You Dont Compare To Pac, Biggie Or Even Me, I Like This Line,/
Shows Your Faggot Tendencies And Denial You 'Hold-Inside',/
Keep Your Raps For 'Storage', Your Gats, Guns 'And-All',/
Whats Your A$$ Gunna Do? Vests That Deflect Dont Come in 'SMALL',/
I've Seen You Critisize, Who Make Ya Champ And Gave The 'Prize',/
That Competition Was Fake No Champ!!! 'Straight-up-Lies',/
You Pick On Mutha-Fuckas Inside Your Threads 'You-Attack',/
My Granny Could Knock You Out With A Lil PlayFul 'Bitch-Slap',/
You Talk Out Your A$$ Your 'Verbal-Disability-Spews',/
The Talent You Think You Got Im Sure You Breathe Through Ur 'A$$-Too',/
I Wont Play The Gay Card, Your Secret Is 'Always-Locked',/
So Tell Me One Think, When Was Your 'Sweet-A$$-Popped',/
I'll Chop You Down To Size, You Embody The 'Word-Nerd',/
I'm The Lyrcally Un-Balanced, Bitch I Got Respect 'Nigga-Word',/
Keep Dreamin Mutha-Fucka, You Smoke Blunts Through 'Crack-Pipes',/
Now You Calimin You A Soldier When You Havent Earned 'Your-Stripes',/
You Talking So Much Smack A A B B C And Fuckin 'D',/
It Aint Just The Structure Mutha-Fucka Its 'The-Potentcy',/
Fucking Hell You Whack Yea I Peeped On Your 'Profile',/
SPuL Mutha-Fucka Young A$$ Looking 'Pedophile',/
You Got 'Beef' .. With Peice420 or 'Class-Sic', Then Count Me 'In',/
I Aint Here To Bring You Down, Just To Tell Ur Sorry A$$ You 'Cant-Win',/

Forgive Me If It Aint My 'Best' Lmfao!! I Was A Bit Rushed From All The Comotion Around In My Direction But!!

Upppppppppppppin 4 Votes!!!

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And I Already Said' .. No Maximum!! Limit!!' lol

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Haha' .. Sorry I Was A Bit Frustrated' ....

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this is a mad hard battle to vote on...........SPuL you had some hard hits and some nice personals and a really nice flow........DisasterPeice you had nice structure and some nice rhymes...........this was a real hard vote but the vote will have to rest on originallity.................






vote: SPuL

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Aight.. I'm not going line by line because that would take too fucking long. So let's see... basically you both had similiar structure, pretty even flow, and you came hard with the punches. So basically it comes down to who was I feeling more, who had nicer wordlplay, better punches, etc.

I go with DP420... Like check this out from spul:


"Battlin’ only newbies… girl… you’re a wussy
You’re rhymes are as tight… as Paris Hilton’s pussy

And that’s very loose… jus to let your fine ass kno
Sleepin’ wit a different guy, each night, y’all are hoes"

Yo I got that second line in the first bar, the explenation is just superfluous, and then that punch in the second line is overused and just kinda weak.

I also liked DP's rhymes more, I felt the vocab a bit more... tight battle though.

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Thanks For The Votes' Ya'll.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Good Looking Out' Shadows'


Still Upppppppppppin 4 Votes

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aiight i think spul could have done better nice punches and structure but that was about it...disaster didnt have that many good punches but when she did use one it hit hard and the whole verse flowed with consistency...disaster also had some nice wordplay and i think she came just a lil bit harder than spul did...nice battle

vote: disaster

nice battle
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Good Looking Out!! - - -

Upppppppppppppin 4 Honest Votes People' .. C'Mon Ya'll

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