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Old 04-15-07, 01:14 AM   #1
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Week 2: Jay-Brook 1-0 .vs. Jonathon 1-0

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Sunday: Battles are setup
Wednesday Night: Jay-Brook 1 bar
Thursday Night: Jonathon 2 bars
Friday Night: Jay-Brook 1 bar
Sunday Morning: Battles close

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Old 04-15-07, 02:21 AM   #2
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check.. mate.. your done son.
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Old 04-16-07, 01:04 AM   #3
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sure.............uppy's
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Old 04-17-07, 07:45 PM   #4
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I was gonna leave RV...but easy wins like you bought me back.
because nothing in life is free......and your sister taught me that.
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Old 04-19-07, 08:17 PM   #5
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An only child, but shit... I'd leave you guessin, I'm bustin this foo
They say I'm sweet & mild, but I'll smash ya, and bring a concussion too
I play with your brain, beating your head like a percussion instrument
I'd rip you like paper, but like Origami - sonz I'll leave you distraut and bent.
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Old 04-20-07, 06:58 PM   #6
Jay-Brook
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You a pimp? ha! Jon your girl blow's like candles on a B-day.
so when I see her I'm make sure to whopper like burgers from BK.
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Old 04-21-07, 12:51 AM   #7
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lol... uppin.. 4 votes
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Old 04-21-07, 10:15 AM   #8
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Wow, weak here. Didn't like either one you this week


Jay-1st punch was wack wack. I don't know if you were thinkin about brandon/ but as far as i know Jonathon's sister/if he even has a sister has nothin to do with rb/rv. Terribly worded. terrible concept just weak

John-No where near as good as last week. 1st bar was ok at best. Nothing special, could have been alot better. more statementish than punchish. 2nd bar same...wording was ok, but overall punch was weak..

Jay-2nd bar plllaaayeeed as all fuck. I know you do better then this on rb. Every punch you drop here, seems like your not even tryin. in my opinion. I hated this 2nd bar, basically just lost you the match.


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Old 04-21-07, 10:46 PM   #9
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I was gonna leave RV...but easy wins like you bought me back.
because nothing in life is free......and your sister taught me that.
uh yea, this punch sucked man. too basic n' played

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An only child, but shit... I'd leave you guessin, I'm bustin this foo
They say I'm sweet & mild, but I'll smash ya, and bring a concussion too
just a statement, where's the creativity?
I play with your brain, beating your head like a percussion instrument
I'd rip you like paper, but like Origami - sonz I'll leave you distraut and bent.
just a threat, no punch here at all

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You a pimp? ha! Jon your girl blow's like candles on a B-day.
so when I see her I'm make sure to whopper like burgers from BK.
yea, this is played n' not that great anyway

Well, all 4 bars here were played, uncreative, and weak. Jonathon didn't even have punches tho and just had statements so for that I'm giving this to Jay.

Vote - Jay
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Old 04-21-07, 11:00 PM   #10
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discribe a punch for me.
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Old 04-21-07, 11:03 PM   #11
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punches hit your opponent Jon.

Nothing

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v/Jay for mehish nothing
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Old 04-21-07, 11:24 PM   #12
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boooooo, terrible from both
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Old 04-22-07, 07:47 AM   #13
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Jay Wins 2-0
Jon Loses 1-1
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