Just having a little fun with the NBA beat used by Joe Budden. This is the first audio that I spit lyrics like I usually write.....plus it's the longest song I've done so far....

Peep the shit and let me get some feedback....

NBA Remix

Drop links if you want me to return the favor.....but I pretty much hit up every song on here that I can

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U got to be on beat...u fallin off at times...but beat is hype...send me i want it..lol lyrics are good. delivery could be betta mic presence also......cuz u sound like u readin it from somewere...........umm the rest is str8


Holla at mine is called Intro-The Way Of Life.

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best song 200 bars by game banigin as shyt

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Ah'ight dawg you always hit my shit up so it only seemed right to do the same for you, ah'ight your flow was decent you missed the snare a couple times during the track but it was decent, your biggest problem was your delivery....you lacked emotion and you sounded like you was reading, in my opinion dats a hype beat so you should have been hyped almost angry sounding on it, also some of your lines u would pause to make it fit in the bar I suggest putting a filler word in there like "the or and" it makes a difference, also try memorizing ya lyrics makes it so much easier to flow, and try standing when you spit it will force u to spit from ya diaphram..."comes out better", overall I'll give this a 7/10, keep recording and you'll be 10/10 in no time

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i liked this yo, it was good,love that beat!!! i would say up your delivery and flow,like the others said, but besides that it was good............keep em coming!!!

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Thanks for all the feedback.....I kinda rushed this one cause I was anxious to drop something new and I just threw together a half assed attempt at a song. I'll rerecord it and come back with it again, but more feedback would still be appreciated

Ohh....D.V, I'll hit your shit up later on tonight....I gotta cook some dinner...

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Just rerecorded.....hit it up again!!!!

NBA Remix

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yea, man, this wasn't that bad.

I personally didn't like this beat for a rap beat, but you wanted to have fun wit it, so I guess it works. lol But yo flow was pretty good. Could be upped a lil. Maybe also up yo volume a lil. But nice shit, man. I liked the lyrics. Overall, pretty good song, man. 7.5/10 good job.

Rise!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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kon Quest...hahaha

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