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10-26-06, 11:58 PM
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Can u guess 2v's Gender?
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When I seek truth.
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The sweet Smell of the finest and worst and something so beautiful it hurts.
Why me? why cheat? I thought you loved me is this what I really deserve? Your smile and laugh still have no touch compared to given ass. My heart opened for you then you take advantage’ Broke me in a thousand pieces a shattered image and broken glass. Tears hit floors like rain on concrete, opening up another part of me. My heart was your answer to your every future dream. When I look in a mirror you’re my reflection’ But then again you connected to guys like a monthly tradition. Cold hearted no feelings and you’re a human being? I saw more of your backside then I did at your heart. Emotionless you ripped me and I fell apart. |
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10-27-06, 07:13 PM
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Human Crack in The Flesh.
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Tears hit floors like rain on concrete, opening up another part of me.
My heart was your answer to your every future dream. ^^ nice line Good job at it, at first i that this would be a poetic piece (hench the name)
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10-28-06, 09:51 AM
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Above Originality
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ncie job man i like how it was short and sweet yet...you did have some wording problems but you did nice hear man no need to really change shit...i mean you did good here why change it?!...i like your emotino and your multies here aswell nice job man keep elevating!
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10-31-06, 10:25 PM
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Can u guess 2v's Gender?
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word thanks for the feed.
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10-31-06, 10:54 PM
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The bitch played you too? Know the feeling
 nice piece duke. I liked the multis like ^^ said but I liked the emotion best. Those are words spoken/written off of true experience. nice piece duke.Check me out and give feedback http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236533
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11-02-06, 06:53 PM
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Flyweight
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Deep stuff my nigga keep it up
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11-02-06, 08:14 PM
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Can u guess 2v's Gender?
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word thanks.
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11-02-06, 09:25 PM
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ghood shit my ni66a...that was some deep shit....u can tell it can straight from the heart...keep it up
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11-03-06, 12:17 AM
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Can u guess 2v's Gender?
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word. uppin for feed on this.
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11-12-06, 01:34 PM
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Human Crack in The Flesh.
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Not bad i liked it................
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