Hand to my heart, will this part of me ever rest?
Tired of running away from the pain that siezes my chest
Stress eating away at the sanity thats left
Possessing that boombox to beat in my breast
To hard to digest, the feeling that overwhelms my mind
Freezes me up, the way it changes through time
Becoming depressed, the one made me obsessed
The hand i can't hold, the face i cannot caress
What is left? a heartache that just will not heal
The one that shone true, tears that i cannot conceal
Are slowly revealed, like the clues at a murder scene
Discovered in time, yet theres still some unseen
Private bonds, so strong between lovers long gone
Clocks stole the essense that memories prolonged

^ Wack!!!!!!!!!!!!!..nah J/K...actually it's pretty decent..I can see that your wordplay is getting better and better by the minute..your flow was good too..content was decent..I can't say anything bad about you..peace..peep out my new piece..

'Hip Hop Therapy' rite? yeah i'll check it, i'm sure its much better than mine..LOL, i got a shock when you said i was wack, i though i could at least count on you to lie..LMAO.. well, there you go, you stopped my heart for all of 5 seconds!

Thanks!!!

anyone wanna drop an unbiased vote on my battle?

Synkronised vs FanTa ZeE

In front lines?

can i get a REEEEPLY


VOTE ON MY BATTLE...UNBIASED

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109603

Pretty Decent piece man...........I like the shit........Flow held up smoothly! All in all it was a good piece.....Look up my latest its called Your My Worst Enemy.....or just click one of my links.....but keep doing your thing an hit me up anytime..........

flow was ill..you have OM's on lock, if u can just express wit more emotion and a more unique writing style..this was a nice piece though, felt it..

props.

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