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Old 11-22-04, 03:19 PM   #1
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"F" a Kontroversy...


its a collab joint........ i got my verse finished...... just waiting on my potna...


been holdin this joint down for a couple days now..... but im posting my half of the collab ... for some feed back..... might end up editing my verse......


so... enjoy...

"ez"
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Old 11-22-04, 04:17 PM   #2
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F-I-R-E.. love dem lyrics flow is a lil off b ut the lyrics is so empowring ... TAKE CHEESE GRADER TO HIS FACE.... god to bad you got someone else poppin off on this i'd jump on it.... yeah but keep droppin kid shits hot... SPENDS HIS WHOLE LIFE DOWNLOADIN BEATS... i think the last bar was a lil meh.. but still hot shizzle
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Old 11-22-04, 05:10 PM   #3
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haha!!!!!

thanks for the feedback homie! yea...... the beat had me stumped for a min.... but.... its still a work in progress.... imma work on the flow and delivery on this joint, cuz believe me, i know what your saying about it being off a lil.. no doubt,

appreciate the feedback
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Old 11-24-04, 02:13 PM   #4
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Old 11-24-04, 06:23 PM   #5
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omg...the flow was appalling...didn't blend with the beat well...and it was clear you were reading


on a positive note, your rhyme scheme was delectable...very nice there...some nice lyrics here and there


if your flow was on par with your rhyming and lyrics, you'd be hella nice...



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Old 11-24-04, 06:59 PM   #6
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yo tito... i can't front on ya style... ya definitely got a different style than most kats... reminds me of some undaground shyt i used to listen to back in da day... yeah... but ya flow was definitely off on this joint... didn't quite ride the beat effectively... lyrics?... i was feeling how ya shyt was worded and the pattern of ya lines... memorize ya shyt and I'm sure ya flow will fall on point... ya shyt is decent, yo... stay up
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Old 11-24-04, 07:33 PM   #7
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if you didn't realise. i am no longer on RV. but. HEY. your merking is coming.
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Old 11-24-04, 07:34 PM   #8
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OMG OMG OMG i just heard this kat. He's wack. thats why i dont post on this site NO DOPE AUDIO HEADS. if you were on my audio site you would get Herassed OMG. lmfao im laughing right now. this was garbage. Just wait fam.
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Old 11-24-04, 08:58 PM   #9
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OMG OMG OMG i just heard this kat. He's wack. thats why i dont post on this site NO DOPE AUDIO HEADS. if you were on my audio site you would get Herassed OMG. lmfao im laughing right now. this was garbage. Just wait fam.


yo kon... you can't front on dude skills...

if this shyt woulda been about anybody else ya prolly woulda said the shyt was hot... but since it's about you, ya catching feelings and shyt... give credit where it's due man and stop frontin'... werd... and how would the kats on ya audio site feel about you ducking seven third? would they "herass" you about that, also?

no beef but let's keep it real, fam...werd
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Old 11-27-04, 08:40 AM   #10
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yo kon... you can't front on dude skills...

if this shyt woulda been about anybody else ya prolly woulda said the shyt was hot... but since it's about you, ya catching feelings and shyt... give credit where it's due man and stop frontin'... werd... and how would the kats on ya audio site feel about you ducking seven third? would they "herass" you about that, also?

no beef but let's keep it real, fam...werd


didnt,no-show,i,left,the,fuckin,site,dumbass
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Old 11-27-04, 02:34 PM   #11
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didnt,no-show,i,left,the,fuckin,site,dumbass

that's funny... you say you left the site but i distinctly remember seeing ya name in a battle thread... after the one issued by 7/3...hmmm... i guess omma go find that link and research some dates... if i remeber it correctly, you'll be the one known as the dumb ass

and i was being nice about the shyt until now... ya audio is shyt.... not the shyt... just straight up shyt... don't get it twisted lil homie... you got potential... but dat about it... grow da hell up and learn how to take constructive criticism... you won't make it in the game with that attitude of yours.... and if ya do, you'll be the reason ya money get all fucked up... calm ya ass down think before ya open ya mouth...werd... and don't worry... omma be doing audio soon enough... yeah, my recording started in real studios... this cool edit shyt is just playtime frolickin'... and that's wussup!

see ya in da booth chump
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Old 11-24-04, 08:10 PM   #12
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Is that why you no showed for seventhird^^because hes whack? rofl..yea.ok..w/e man..tito, this was dope, your vocals need to be a little lower,but you do have a different style...this drop was dope fam,good lyrics...keep em comin1
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Old 11-27-04, 08:38 AM   #13
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Is that why you no showed for seventhird^^because hes whack? rofl..yea.ok..w/e man..tito, this was dope, your vocals need to be a little lower,but you do have a different style...this drop was dope fam,good lyrics...keep em comin1

I,never,No-showed,

I left the site fukin retard, theres differences. I dont have time for bullshit like that no more.. lol at this bitch tryina fit in..by lookin at your picz

its clear you cant....stik to poetry...lol
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Old 11-27-04, 01:50 PM   #14
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I,never,No-showed,

I left the site fukin retard, theres differences. I dont have time for bullshit like that no more.. lol at this bitch tryina fit in..by lookin at your picz

its clear you cant....stik to poetry...lol



calm dat shit down lil nigga...she would prolly rape ya ass...y u leave the site huh?? cuz everybody was provin u was wack??

im glad u left...tired of wack niggas on the mic...
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Old 11-28-04, 12:34 AM   #15
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I,never,No-showed,

I left the site fukin retard, theres differences. I dont have time for bullshit like that no more.. lol at this bitch tryina fit in..by lookin at your picz

its clear you cant....stik to poetry...lol



ROFL... Checkin to a battle, and not dropping a verse is definately no showing, especially when in your "Im leaving" thread you specifically said you droppin for our battle... You suck seriously.
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