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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
David 1 16.67%
GlocKoma 5 83.33%
Voters: 6. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
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Old 03-18-05, 03:40 PM   #16
GlocKoma
Flyweight
 
IP: 28AD 5545

LoL... That's Bars Line Iz So Played It's Not Even Funny... But It Makes No Difference...
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Old 03-18-05, 03:49 PM   #17
ethiks
been dope.
 
From: S.D.
IP: 8155 9B30

Voted For: David

david:
aight verse. nothin too special. your structure was ok
i guess. the flow was decent.....but not to good.
try addin wordplay & multis in their, so it will flow better.
you only really had one decent punch, but it was good enough to get my vote.

glock:
you verse wasnt so good. your structure was shit, couldnt catch the rhythm. a battle is not bout whos
structure is more fancier....its bout punches, flow,
personals....ect. but keep elevating.

v/ david

return the favor....
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=181275
 
Old 03-18-05, 05:37 PM   #18
GlocKoma
Flyweight
 
IP: ABE5 5A5C

Naw Nigga... ^Fuck You... My Structure Waz Damn Near Perfect Are You Blind..? Lines Were Almost EXACTLY Same Length... Italics And Bold Jus Pointed Out The Multies And Wordplay/punch... Rhythem..? I Had Multies And Shorter Lines... If Any Thing You Couldn't Catch His Rhythem... That's A Hate Vote Cuz This Nigga Jus Didn't Like My Decoration... So Fuck You And Don't Ever Vote In One Of My Battles Bitch...
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Old 03-19-05, 10:34 PM   #19
Da_Throwdest
Banned: Cheating
 
From: Durty Souf
IP: A3EA 639E

Voted For: GlocKoma

aiight David,
your shit was not the best. Yo flow was alright not that good. You had some ok punches, nothing special. I was feelin' some of them. Some real nice ones. Your structure was pretty nice too. Just elevate in ur wordplay 4 future reference. But overall a pretty nice verse, man. props 8/10

Glock,
you had a nice verse. Your flow was on in this. Your structure was ok. Closer I loved. tight shit. Yo punches kept on hitting too. Real nice job. 8.5/10

I think this was a 1 sided battle. Both of y'all gonna be good in the future so keep practicing. nice job.
but vote/ GlocKoma

plz RTF nobody does it anymore, but please do it.
 
 


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