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03-10-08, 01:31 AM
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Herb
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IP:
shit was hott liked the way you told the story...kinda long but enjoyable..nice flow to it...vocab would be the onlything i would say you should work on..story great stucture great creativity great....good fukin drop man...stay active!!!!
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03-10-08, 02:34 PM
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IP:
Thanks for the feed man, its appreciated.
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